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 Post subject: Narnia Poems Contest! (closed and up for judging)
PostPosted: November 3rd, 2005, 1:37 am 
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Rules-

1.Narnia based Poems Only.

2.No swearing, cursing, foul, ect.

3.The poem has to be at least 5 lines long.

4.Have fun!

5.If you read the rules first put the word Beaver before you say you would like to enter.

10 people can enter! :)

I will try to get award banners for the winners, for 1st, 2nd, and 3rd.

Users entered-
1. Dreia
2.Linariel
3.Mirelenasilmeriel
4. Ellethwen
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Poems-

1.Narnia- By Dreia

There is a world that is hard to discover
where naiads and dryads frolic with each other.
Where animals talk and giants roam
where four of our children made their home.

From across the sea the king will come
when needed, the Emporer will send his son
From Calormen to the end of the sea
Aslan is king and rules over thee

Many adventures took place in that land
a hundred year winter a captured prince and
whenever the need of the land grew too great
children would come before it was too late.

What is this land where the animals speak?
Where is the country? May I take a peek?
The answer, my friend, in your heart is flying.
Do you have to courage to answer the lion?

2. Aslan- by Mirelenasilmeriel


A great lion,
a selfless hero,
For many in Narnia
he was both friend and King,
When all seemed lost he did
what he knew was right and just.

But there was a deeper magic a work,
One not even the witch could understand,
And so when Stone Table cracked,
All of Narnia began to rejoice and have hope,
Even though for many years he was King,
He selflessly gave his life for another.

With golden fur and ruffled mane
He stands majesticly by a pavillion,
As one evil has lost and good has won.

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PostPosted: November 3rd, 2005, 8:26 am 
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Beaver!
Please save me a spot!

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PostPosted: November 3rd, 2005, 1:29 pm 
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okay Dreia Your in :)

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PostPosted: November 3rd, 2005, 2:33 pm 
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May I please have a spot! :)

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PostPosted: November 3rd, 2005, 2:46 pm 
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Yep your added. :D

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PostPosted: November 3rd, 2005, 4:20 pm 
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PostPosted: November 3rd, 2005, 7:50 pm 
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Just so you'd notice...

Yes, I'm entering.

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PostPosted: November 3rd, 2005, 10:35 pm 
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Here is my poem. I am notorious for changing my mind, so I may write another one instead. lol. I know not everything matches exactly, but I'm not too good at poetry.

Narnia

There is a world that is hard to discover
where naiads and dryads frolic with each other.
Where animals talk and giants roam
where four of our children made their home.

From across the sea the king will come
when needed, the Emporer will send his son
From Calormen to the end of the sea
Aslan is king and rules over thee

Many adventures took place in that land
a hundred year winter a captured prince and
whenever the need of the land grew too great
children would come before it was too late.

What is this land where the animals speak?
Where is the country? May I take a peek?
The answer, my friend, in your heart is flying.
Do you have to courage to answer the lion?

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PostPosted: November 4th, 2005, 1:27 am 
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Lovley poem dreia :)

Mirelenasilmeriel and Ellethwen you both have a spot :D

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PostPosted: November 5th, 2005, 1:58 am 
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Aslan

A great lion,
a selfless hero,
For many in Narnia
he was both friend and King,
When all seemed lost he did
what he knew was right and just.

But there was a deeper magic a work,
One not even the witch could understand,
And so when Stone Table cracked,
All of Narnia began to rejoice and have hope,
Even though for many years he was King,
He selflessly gave his life for another.

With golden fur and ruffled mane
He stands majesticly by a pavillion,
As one evil has lost and good has won.

P.S Hope you like it.

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PostPosted: November 5th, 2005, 9:47 am 
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Oooo, I like it! Just one thing, is there supposed to be and is in here:

For many he both friend
and King,

Go Aslan!

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PostPosted: November 5th, 2005, 3:14 pm 
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Dreia wrote:
Oooo, I like it! Just one thing, is there supposed to be and is in here:

For many he both friend
and King,

Go Aslan!


That was a Grammarical error, but I fixed it.

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PostPosted: November 10th, 2005, 5:50 pm 
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I thought so ^_^. Sould I use that poem or this one?

Aslan’s Land

I did not know what was in store
when first I came unto this land.
Like something out of ancient lore,
This place in which I stand.

The grass is just too green, I say
the rivers, too fresh and clean.
The trees, like living things do sway
Like someplace lost inside a dream

How came I to this land of hope?
This land across the sea?
Too broad and deep for human scope
Tis just the place for thee

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PostPosted: November 11th, 2005, 12:04 pm 
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Very good job! now just to wait for more entrys and the others to add there poems then ill add the poll. :)

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PostPosted: November 18th, 2005, 6:47 pm 
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Since she entered the wardrobe...

Her brown eyes layed on the wardrobe,
Something inside her wanted to step into it,
She smiled when she opened it not even knowing what it would hold.

When she went in she found herself in...
A wood in the death of winter,
She walked towards a bright light,
Which was reflected onto the snow,
And there she saw a...
lamp post?
Who would ever thought
that you would see a lamp post in the middle of the woods
But there it was plain as day

She looked about her
Nothing but trees circled around her path
The bitter frost bit at her lips,
Making her feel more chilly

So, she stared out into the distance
Not knowning what would come
Since she entered that wardrobe...

(I hope it's okay.I just hope this one makes sense and is all right it took a great deal of thinking to come up with it.)

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PostPosted: November 19th, 2005, 1:55 am 
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very nice I will put it up soon.

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