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Post subject:  Posted: November 19th, 2005, 1:14 am |
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Vader turned around for a moment, wanting to come out of the chains that held him so tightly, but the darkside of the force crept slowly back into his mind and thoughts. His back was turned to Jena, he did not want to look at her.
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Post subject: Posted: November 19th, 2005, 3:32 am |
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She saw him with his back turned. I hope some day Anakin you'll be free from the dark side. She said through the force to him. He was still there bound up some where inside Anakin was there.
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Post subject: Posted: November 19th, 2005, 6:19 pm |
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Vader heard the force of Jena's words come to him. He wanted to reach out for help, just as he had reached for Obi-Wan's help on Mustafar as he was burned. He turned back around and replied in the force Never, will I turn back....
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Post subject: Posted: November 19th, 2005, 7:40 pm |
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I know there is still good in you some where. She sighed Padme had been right he was still some where inside that mechanical body was Anakin. The brave young man who had always been so warm, and friendly. She let a tear fall down her cheek. Feeling sorry for what happened to him. She could hardly speak her body was loosing oxygen rapidly.
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Post subject: Posted: November 19th, 2005, 9:38 pm |
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Again he heard Jena talk to him through the force, but this time he didn't reply. It sank deep within his heart, and choked it painfully. He thought of the past, and what he had done, he thought of Padme, and as he did, he once again grew angry.
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Post subject: Posted: November 19th, 2005, 10:29 pm |
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Jena felt his anger. She tried to breathe but she could barely her life was almost gone. With the damaged lungs, and broken back. She wasn't going to last much longer.
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Post subject: Posted: November 20th, 2005, 12:28 am |
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Vader turned back around towards Jena. He stared at her, not knowing what to do. Most of his feelings wanted to murder her, but something was tugging back at him. What was it? His breathing echoed through the halls, as he stood, looking down at her.
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Post subject: Posted: November 20th, 2005, 8:10 pm |
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She gasped trying to keep her breathing fluent. It was hard because of the sevre damage in her lungs. Jena stared at Anakin knowing that he was still under there. His breathing filled the room.
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Post subject: Posted: November 21st, 2005, 2:28 pm |
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He still stared at her, then heard Palpatine talk to him through his thought and mind. The darkness soaked him up, like a sponge soaks up water. He walked over to the chil and picked her back up, this time by the back of the neck, "Now, as you lay there, dieing, any last words to your child? Or will you tell me where my child is?"
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Post subject: Posted: November 21st, 2005, 7:36 pm |
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"As I told you before I don't know Anakin." She said breaking into tears.
Then she looked at her daughter. "Mara." The child looked straight into her eyes. "No matter what happens be brave, and don't give into darkness. I love you so much." She blew her a weak kiss.
Then gasped and coughed hard she knew her end would come soon. She breathed in and out slowly. Rapidly she was loosing it. Then all the sudden she breathed her last breath. And Jena was dead.
(after we finish with her we can do the part with Mara's fate)
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Post subject: Posted: November 21st, 2005, 8:47 pm |
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(Oh my gosh! I killed a girl!....Cool! Just jokin'!)
Vader stared at the body of Jena. Half of him screamed with pain inside, but the other half rejoiced. An evil smirk crossed his face, even though it couldn't be seen. He still held the child by the back of the neck, thinking about what he just had done.
(Um...I don't know Mara's story to well, you wanna PM it to me?)
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Post subject: Posted: November 21st, 2005, 8:50 pm |
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(okay)
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Post subject: Posted: November 21st, 2005, 8:59 pm |
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(Thanks! 8) )
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Post subject: Posted: November 21st, 2005, 9:01 pm |
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(your welcome)
Mara Jade shivered in Vader's hands.
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Post subject: Posted: November 21st, 2005, 9:11 pm |
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Vader talked to his Master through the force saying Jena is no more my Master.
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Post subject: Posted: November 21st, 2005, 9:13 pm |
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Very good my young apprentice. You've done well.
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