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Post subject:  Posted: January 23rd, 2006, 7:15 pm |
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Cilicia knew he was to far pat to help Val now. He concentrated wholy on the race.
He jumped past another speeder and began closing in on Anakin slowly.
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Post subject: Posted: January 23rd, 2006, 8:02 pm |
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Anakin's eyes widened as he saw Val's speeder crash rather violently. He would've stopped, but he was going way to fast to let that happen. His speeder swerved for a moment or two as he kept turning his head back to look at the crash.
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Post subject: Posted: January 23rd, 2006, 8:07 pm |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Jaden noticed Anakin swerve infront of him as he moved in, speed pushed to the max.
"He must have seen Val." he thought to himself.
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Post subject: Posted: January 23rd, 2006, 8:24 pm |
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Val stood up, carefully, then waited while the world stopped spinning. The bright lights against the darkness of Coruscant's night made her head throb - she probably had a mild concussion, she decided. The padawan took a step forward - then gasped in shock as pure, undiluted pain ripped through her left arm up to her shoulder. Her half-scream had probably been transmitted over her still-active headset, but she didn't care. Val leaned against the cantina wall to rest.
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Post subject: Posted: January 23rd, 2006, 8:26 pm |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Jaden loged into the local chanels and gave Val's location the closest medicla facility then continued racing.
Before to long the medical assistance arrived to aid Val.
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Post subject: Posted: January 23rd, 2006, 8:30 pm |
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Anakin's focus was thrown off as he heard the scream of Val's coming over the headset. His ship swerved again, this time barely missing one of the skyscrapers. He grew angry and frustrated as he worried for Val, and these feelings made the force in him grow stronger, and he drived his speeder even faster.
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Post subject: Posted: January 23rd, 2006, 8:37 pm |
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Val watched the approaching medics with a mixture of relief and apprehension. If they found out she was a Jedi, or connected her with the illegal race, she would be in big trouble.
She said little, taking the painkillers they offered, and letting them squirt antibiotics over her cuts. They set her wrist, and began to insist that she accompany them to the local hospital.
"Ummm... no thanks. Really. I'll be all right. It was just a speeder malfunction." Val wriggled free of their grasps and ran down the road, hoping to get back to the Tower and finishing line before the race was over. Which it would be, in maybe two minutes.
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Post subject: Posted: January 23rd, 2006, 9:18 pm |
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Post subject: Posted: January 24th, 2006, 2:30 am |
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Post subject: Posted: January 24th, 2006, 2:30 pm |
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Jaden looked ahead, the finish line was almost in sight.
He pressd his speeder to the limits, once again emersing himself in the force to aid in his pilotying and speed.
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Post subject: Posted: January 24th, 2006, 2:54 pm |
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Val stood on the steps of the Tower, sensing the racers in the distance. There was only one more obstacle - a power relay station. If any of the speeders touched one of the numerous webs of power lines or couplings, it meant instant death.
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Post subject: Posted: January 24th, 2006, 2:55 pm |
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Jaden came up witht he obsticles as though a small voice whispering in his ears, though his eyes were closed.
Skillfully and guided by the force he glided around them at the maximum safe speed.
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Post subject: Posted: January 24th, 2006, 8:07 pm |
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Cilicia rammed another speeder into the side of the building and passed by another, making his way into the final obsticles. He was ambistios... but not stupid. He slowed to a relatively safe pace and made his way around the things.
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Post subject: Posted: January 25th, 2006, 12:31 am |
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Anakin's anger grew more intense as he thought more about Val and what sort of suffering she might be in. He made his ways through the obstacles with ease for another sort of force ran through his body as he grew more angry and frustrated.
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Post subject: Posted: January 25th, 2006, 2:14 am |
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Val watched as the front runners broke the energy barrier that was the finish line. Among them were three silvery blurs tightly bunched together- Anakin, then Jaden, then Cilicia. Their times, she guessed, would differ only by microseconds. It looked like they had a good composite score - but then, one could never tell until the results were officially posted. She fiddled with the air-splint holding her wrist immobile, and waited.
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Post subject: Posted: January 25th, 2006, 12:28 pm |
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Jaden raced out of the bariers and raced for the finish line with all his speed and force ability.
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