I'm descending
down so far

lost in blackness
cold and hard

where is this place
this cursed place

where I feel myself slip
into madness again

i hear men talk
to find none near

I see cold eyes
looking down here

what is this place?
where i feel fear

it saturates me
can't you feel it to?

It's everywhere
the thing so cold

I can't feel myself
numbed by the frost

I can't wait
to awake from this

from this cursed,
sullen madness

now i know how those people in asylums feel....

oh that sounds sad.... nice poem though. What prevoced that?

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I just heard someone post something with the word madness, and the feeling caught me

lol I know how that is. The other day I saw a shadow and for some random reason the word stuck in my mind.

After runing it through a few times I came up with "The shadow of the night" So i wrote a poem for it. lol

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i just saw this and thought about an asylum fanficition(matrix)....and pop went the inspiration bubble

I like it, I like it a lot. I like it even more since it's a cuplet! That is how you spell it right?

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Yeah.. that's cool. For me things like that usualy turn out the best.





...no idea. What is a cuplet? (sorry if I should know that)

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I like it!! It's very good.

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