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Post subject: Posted: March 14th, 2006, 5:16 pm |
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She backed into a tree, she was trapped...She slowly got up to her feet and tried to ignore the pain.
"Why are you doing this?"
"You would have done the same."he said and came closer.
"No I wouldn't."
"Yes you would because you love me just as much as I love you."
"How can you love me?!You're trying to kill me!"she said loud.
"No, baby, never kill you. You used to say that pain now and then was good for you. Isn't that right?"
"Bryan..."she said...
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Post subject: Posted: March 14th, 2006, 5:26 pm |
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(GTG now)
Eevee blinked, wanting the noises within her midn to stop. She winced and the started to fade away. Her worry for Liz emerged once again and she didn't know what to do.
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Post subject: Posted: March 14th, 2006, 5:36 pm |
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(Ok, by sweety  )
"What?"he answerd and she scarth him in his face, he backed off and she started to get away from there.
It hurted so much, she was walking as fast as she could. She had to get back to the mansion.
She spotted Tania in a tree, what was she doing up there?!
"Tania!"she said loud.
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Post subject: Posted: March 14th, 2006, 6:29 pm |
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Tanias snapped out of her daze as she heard Liz's cry for help.
Jumping from the branch, she landed on her feet. She seen Liz crawling on the grass, she was in pain. Someone was standing over her, a sadistic smile on his face. He was brandishing a knife.
Just as he raised it, Tania ran at him and grabbed him by the throat.
She used all of her strength to pin him to a nearby tree.
Her eyes, blazing with fury.
"Who the hell are you? And just what the hell do you think you're doing?"
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Post subject: Posted: March 14th, 2006, 7:14 pm |
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Ashleygh came to the area, and she looked at Tania and the man, before going to Liz.
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Post subject: Posted: March 14th, 2006, 7:28 pm |
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The mysterious man stayed stony silent. But had this sly smile. Like he knew something Tania didn't.
Tania tightened her grip around his neck.
"Well....answer me or I squeeze..harder"
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Post subject: Posted: March 15th, 2006, 3:23 am |
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"Tania...Don't..."Liz said and looked at them.
Tania looked at her and seem a little bit confused.
"Still wants to save me huh baby?"Bryan said and Tania looked at him.
"Take him...to a cell.Please Tania."Liz said and ignored Bryan.
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Post subject: Posted: March 15th, 2006, 8:37 am |
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"If that's what you want" Tania looked at Liz as she nodded, hanging her head.
She turned back to the young man that Liz called Bryan.
"Count yourself lucky. She just saved your @ss."
With that Tania dragged the young man into the mansion. All the while he smiled at Liz. Almost pleased with the turn of events.
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Post subject: Posted: March 15th, 2006, 10:42 am |
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Liz slowly got up from the ground, Ash was on her way to help her.
"I'm ok."she said and started to walk towards the mansion.
She follow Tania and Bryan down to the cells.
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Post subject: Posted: March 15th, 2006, 12:29 pm |
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All right guys, we're going to have to take this down a few levels. I've been reading this RPG and I've seen excessive amounts of cussing from mostly all of you except Elenanna and Galasriniel. Now, I'm not going to go back and modify all your posts..because it would take me a long time. So, please, all of you try using the word 'Heck' instead of Hell. The only reason Hell isn't censored is because someone might be using it as actually talking about ‘Hell’ but the way you're all using it isn't the appropriate way.
Also, LaylaEvenstar nothing in the rules states that you can't have your boyfriend beat you up blah blah, I understand what you're trying to do. But PLEASE, you're going too much into detail (not to mention going around the censor with you know which word.) with this sentence:
"No baby, never kill you. Just f*ck you up a little. And after all, pain now and then is good for you. Wasn't that what you used to say?"
So, I've taken the liberty to modify the sentence myself, you can reread it to see what I made it.  Please, in your future posts don't describe things as much. I'll be watching this RPG for a bit, but I trust that you'll all listen to me?
[s]Evenstar[/s]
Bellatrix Lestrange
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Post subject: Posted: March 15th, 2006, 12:49 pm |
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(:p I'm a good, wittle girl who behaves  )
Eevee wandred around the grounds, ignoring the icy breeze. She recently heared distant chatter but it had quietened down.
What had happened? She brisked inside, following the sound of footsteps which were leading her to the containment cell.
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Post subject: Posted: March 15th, 2006, 1:08 pm |
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(You mean the fighting and that? I thought I held back in details 0_o.
The censor thing I'll stop with. I will listen to you, I promise..I just
well got into it a little much like my books and fanfiction  )
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Post subject: Posted: March 15th, 2006, 1:18 pm |
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LaylaEvenstar wrote: (You mean the fighting and that? I thought I held back in details 0_o. The censor thing I'll stop with. I will listen to you, I promise..I just well got into it a little much like my books and fanfiction  )
Don't worry, I completely understand. You did hold back in the fighting details, it's mostly just the dialogue you've got to watch yourself on. Just in the future be more careful with what you say. Thanks guys 
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Post subject: Posted: March 15th, 2006, 1:56 pm |
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(waits for someone to start)
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Post subject: Posted: March 15th, 2006, 2:15 pm |
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(Ok, so just the sweringpart? I can look away from that...Yeah, I'll stay ^^)
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Post subject: Posted: March 15th, 2006, 2:19 pm |
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(Fair enough... but to be honest, 'hell' ain't really offensive. Layal did get slightly overboard once but that was the only time)
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