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PostPosted: March 29th, 2006, 7:45 pm 
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*An alternate look at Hades, ruler of the Greek underworld



The dark king
rests, cold and weary

his eyes dull
from days long gone

Hades longs for
what he has ever lost

The light of the sky
the warmth of the sun

He longs for the Earth
domain of Zeus

But he stays 'lone
hidden under earth

And evermore
will Hades mourn
stony eyes teary.


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PostPosted: March 29th, 2006, 7:53 pm 
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aww ... thats such a sweet poem! it made me cry a little :'( like a lot of poems do ... poems are such beautiful things...especially yours

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thank you, I find it easy to express that sense of loss I put into my poems.
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:drool: wow! I really like this. I am a poet myself. You should expand on it. This poem has a lot of room and potential! :)
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PostPosted: March 29th, 2006, 8:35 pm 
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poety, i find, is impossible for me to write :confused: i just love reading other peoples' poems and enjoy them ;) you should write more and post them up :)

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:) It was a good poem but personaly I like the ryming ones... but it was still a good peom! :) (that's just my personal opinion)

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