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Post subject: Posted: April 3rd, 2006, 8:09 pm |
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(one question...exactly what is Gondorian Nobility doing outside of Gondor? Just wondering...and I think that it would be better for Nessi to just be puzzled for awhile. Eomi will come into the picture soon enough)
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Post subject: Posted: April 3rd, 2006, 8:13 pm |
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(maybe I like to travel.and will you still post?)
Nessima stood puzzled and gave up she went basck into the pub and went to her room and bolted the door and windows she lit candle and pulled a book out of her carpetbag it was about the Teleri
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Post subject: Posted: April 3rd, 2006, 8:19 pm |
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(yeah sure!! Just get your character where you want her to be, emotionally, plot wise etc. Eomi's skittish right now, and not to fond of trusting people. I'll still post and everything it will just take longer than most RP's for everyone one to hook up. Another thing to is with this extra time, you can tell people more about your character, like have her think back to what brought her to this place and why she's there. It's a great way to really set the scene and make your character into a real life person that we can believe and see.)
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Post subject: Posted: April 3rd, 2006, 8:26 pm |
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(thanks)
Nessima thought to a while back when her father had sent her on this mission to find one worthy of the crown of gondor he was the last of the crown and he was wounded mortally and he needed an heir and he wasn't going to put a 15 year old on the throne nessima was two years under the age limit of law her father had even said "even an exile can come back" but nessima had another mission too she had to deliver a message to someone named Samwise Gamgee.
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Post subject: Posted: April 3rd, 2006, 8:30 pm |
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(thats good now expand a little...why was the King wounded? How did he become wounded? Why didn't he send soliders instead of his daughter to find someone worthy? Details make it all the more the real. And for you other two come in whenever you want)
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Post subject: Posted: April 3rd, 2006, 8:34 pm |
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King Valdon had been wounded in a battle between some orcs who came out of hiding and
well the wound wouldn't close it just bled he didn't want to send soldiers because he needed all his soldiers at home to prepare for attacks and he also knew that if he sent his daughter away for a while she'd be safe(ironic that both girls are sent away)
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Post subject: Posted: April 3rd, 2006, 8:36 pm |
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Post subject: Posted: April 3rd, 2006, 11:45 pm |
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Elegost was after Nessima but there was two now. He did not know who is the girl he must kidnapp so he decided to kidnapp them both. He entered into tavern. He sat down to a chair to do scouting incase she comes.
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Post subject: Posted: April 4th, 2006, 12:38 pm |
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(ack!! nobody saw Eomi go into the stable!! *sighs* alright...time for me to address a few holes in the RP...<br>
1. Since this is in the 4th Age the King would have a steady line of heirs already.<br>
2. Elohir has no claim whatsoever to the Crown of Gondor, only someone from the Line of Isildur could become King<br>
3.To make the thief realistic he would lie low<br>
4. This RP is not going to be like one of those, you meet, you fight, you die, the end. Eomira is NOT going to just jump out of nowhere and ask to be part of the group. She's jumpy and on the run, normally when someone is on the run they do not go into public places and talk to people. <br>
Here's my basic plot for the RP. Eomira is only BANISHED from Ithilien. And if you have read the first post you would see that this is set in "Southren Ithilien" She will meet up with some people eventually but not RIGHT AWAY. <br>
I know I am being a pain in the neck, but this is an advanced RP. It will take awhile for everyone to meet up and for the whole plot thing to thicken. So for now, stay at the Tavern converse with a few people, don't do anything drastic and wait till it turns daylight then Eomira will come out again.)
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Post subject: Posted: April 4th, 2006, 1:12 pm |
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(read through everything again...no Hobbits...and Eomi is not going to be crowned Queen of Gondor...no queen's of gondor. Because if the king die the Steward would take the Throne. No matter what.)
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Post subject: Posted: April 4th, 2006, 2:45 pm |
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Strethen sighed and pushed open the door of the tavern. The doors swung back behind him and snapped shut. He ducked under the door of the stable and walked over to the dark figure of his horse.
"Isn't it a bit dark in here boy." He said quietly to his horse. Thresten tossed his black head in aggrement. He walked over to a braket in the wall, feeling his way in the darkness, and lit it with a waxed match he always carried with him. Threseten watched Strethin and snorted as his master came nearer.
"It's alright boy. We'll be gone tomorrow. Can't stay in one place too long. Not with them after us."
The stallion nickered in some sort of agreement. Strethin had been on the run since for over a year now. Always on the go. Never in the same place at the same time. He used the shadows, crept about like an assasin. Always a differant hiding place. Hoping they wouldn't find him...
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Post subject: Posted: April 4th, 2006, 2:55 pm |
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(*nods* Nice post...have a question though, could you possibly expand your bio in the history section? I know he's shy and all but the characters wouldn't know his history just us. It would make it easier to find out exactly what and who Strethen is.)
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Post subject: Posted: April 4th, 2006, 3:17 pm |
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(Done. I added it to my first post.)
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Post subject: Posted: April 5th, 2006, 1:44 pm |
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(Thank you. Hmm..another sort of thief...I guess that would be alright...just not to many...it's not the band of thieves:D oh! another thing here, nobody knows that Eomi's a girl...because if you looked back to my other posts I said "A figure" and she had the mask sort of thing on so your characters don't know!)
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Post subject: Posted: April 5th, 2006, 2:35 pm |
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(*clears throat* Excuse me, that was uncalled for)
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Post subject: Posted: April 5th, 2006, 2:48 pm |
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Joined: 24 October 2005 Posts: 420 Location: Wherever the Road takes me
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(*smiles* much better. You can join...just I would prefer no more thieves or half elves...)
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