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 Post subject: Brave New World
PostPosted: May 24th, 2006, 12:18 pm 
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The Plot:

The World was divided in two after thousands of years of conquering, at first no empires were created, but slowly empires were formed trough betrayals, pacts and wars. As the two great empires were formed life seemed peaceful for the world, but then disaster struck as the other empires only heir of the emperor was slain by a group of assasins. In his missery the emperor wanted someone to blame and his eyes turned towards his neighbour, the real truth was never found out yet the war started between the two.

Many great battles were fought, thounsands died and cities ruined until one day both of the emperors met on the great plains of Yithare. Both sides engaged fanaticly against each others, in the end neither prevailed and the armies broke scattering. Many soldiers ran away when they saw their emperors fall in battle, the soldiers went home leaving a bloody mess behind. Now power hungry warlords want to claim lands that they can, cities have all claimed indepence so whp will seize this opportunity? And whom will rise to power? All that remains of the two great empires of Scytha and Delerman are only remnants of their forces and greatest cities...

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(This a remake of my older rp, Age of creation...)

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Name: Daraniar(Draz) Mentecus

Age: 138

Race: 3/4 Elf

Position/Profession: Bandit/Ex-Captain of the Scythas emperors armies

Appearence: Long brown hair that reach his shoulder, inspective dark grey eyes, sharp facial features, long and thin fingers.

Clothes: Dark brown clothes, a sleeveless shirt, brown pants and a red shash, a brown studded leather armour, iron bracelets and a dark cape with a golden image of a wyvern wearing a scepter.

Weapons: A Scimitar and a long dagger(main weapons), five throwing axes on his belt and a handblade that is hidden in his bracelet.

History:

Draz was the second child of a rich couple(all tough his sister was from an earlier marriage of his father) living in the great empire of Delerman, Draz of course isn`t his own name, but Daraniar yet he prefers his shorter favourite name that his father liked to use. Draz and his sister Alariel spent a happy childhood until they were in for a grown up life. Draz of course grew up sort of at the same time as his sister all tough she was older, but the human blood in him must have been a factor. Draz began a military career, his sister had another cours, but as war came the family had to move away from the border that they were living near to.

As Draz was in the military he heard that his family was dead and as he arrived at the families estate he found his sister alive. He took her back to the garrison where she was putten back to health yet suprised everyone by wanting to join the army to have revenge upon the scythans. Draz was first terrified yet then accepted the fact that he might die leaving his sister alone. They were both putten into the same unit as leaders of it or Draz was the leader, but after two years they got into a tight spot and Draz`s sister solved the situation saving the empires supply lines. After two years from that his sister had become somewhat of a legend and was awarded as the rank of a general while Draz was a Colonel.

In his jealosy Draz betrayed his own sister jumping to the Scythans, he made a suprise attack against his sisters troops, which could have caused a disaster yet he Draz was beaten and he could only swear to surpass his sister one day. After a month from that the great battle came and so the two met on the battlefield...

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Thousands bodies layed on the ground, most dead and the rest of them dying as they couldn`t get up. Some had walked away and the most fanatical fought to the bitter not to mention pointeless end. A lonely figure stood on the field quietly singing to himself something, he had his scimitar and dagger at hand. By his face you could tell that he was exhausted, but yet had an odd look in his eyes as, if he was waiting for something. Soon a figure walked across the field towards him, the man smirked as he saw his own sister. The target of all his anger and fustration for all these years, the sister he had betrayed in his jealousy and the sister he still wanted to kill.

"Draz..." Alariel started after they had stood there quietly for a while.

"Yes sis?" Draz said quietly with a smile.

"Come, lets go home and leave this whole mess behind us..." She said offering her hand.

"Ah... that would be your picture of a happy ending wouldn`t it?" Draz asked with a bitter tone as he grinned his teeth.

"It`s what you own me after.... what you did..." She said with a serious tone.

"I own you nothing, I never did and yet you always stole all the credit. A general they all said wondering how his brother felt being thrown into the corner as the great general was turning the war for the empire...." Draz hmped. "I guess that doesn`t matter whom we served, but what happened and what will happen between us does..."

Draz finnished as he point his scimitar towards his sister.

"You can`t be serious, it is over Draz! The war is over! There is no reason to fight, we can go home and live happily. I do not hate you for betraying me..." Alariel protested.

"But I do hate you, I guess it has been always my human side that has hated you and spoiled my elven blood."

Draz said and swinged his weapons as he attacked Alariel, but she was prepared and blocked the strikes with her longsword. They both exhanged strikes and Draz slashed his sisters hand to blood, she had to fight with her right hand yet always shouted at his mad brother to stop. Draz jumped and swinged his sword, then his dagger followed and then he felt the blade his ribs. He ughed and stepped back dropping his weapons, he felt tired and wanted to just leave to his mother and father. He heard his sisters sad shouts, but that wasn`t enough to bring him back, he closed his eyes as his blood flowed to the ground.

He heard her sister crying, he had finally got his revenge and triumphed over his sister. Soon it would be over and he would have won, imagine that.


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PS. To others, you may have been involved in the battle or something else...

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PostPosted: May 24th, 2006, 12:25 pm 
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i'll join - lemme think of a character

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Lady.Isteleth wrote:
i'll join - lemme think of a character


Good, you may have been a part of the battle, if you wish, but in anycase it effects everyone

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PostPosted: May 24th, 2006, 12:56 pm 
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Name: Aldea Lothen

Age: 130

Race: Elf

Position/Profession: Assasin/Warrior

Appearence: Dirty blonde hair & grey eyes, small petit build, light and easy on her feet. Avoids wearing dresses if possible, tends to wear a forest green tunic, brown pants and a brown hooded cloak that helps her camouflage.

Weapons: A bow and quiver or arrows, also a small dagger that her mother gave her.

History: Born and raised by her mother on a small farm and cottage to the east of the forest, helped out on the farm with the animals, also went to the market every weekend where she learnt the skill of the bow and arrow from a travelling elf.
Mother died when she was 17, she then moved from Scytha to Delerman to live with her aunt and uncle who owned a inn within the city.
She soon started to get involved with her uncles trade and became his right hand man (woman) who is trusted with the most sercret yet dangerous tasks.

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PostPosted: May 24th, 2006, 1:38 pm 
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(sure, then post about where your char is after the battle, at the battle field or somewhere else)

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PostPosted: May 25th, 2006, 1:34 am 
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I'll join this game. Any race right? I mean can I have nomadic snow men?

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Certainly you do, there were many races serving the emperors so sure you can and your chars didn`t even have to be in the armies, but thats up to you

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PostPosted: May 25th, 2006, 12:11 pm 
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uhh i'm not sure exactly how to start ...

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PostPosted: May 25th, 2006, 9:38 pm 
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Ok....hope this is ok
Name: Icitis Hucsoid

Age: 150

Race: Elf

Position: Assassin Leader

Appearance: Onyx black hair and cold blue eyes, graceful body and very fast. Emotionless face

Clothing: Dark robes and headscarf covering his entire face minus his eyes. Wears a dark-green cape with a snake around a sword.

Weapons: A katana like sword with three daggers

History: Icitis was born to a rich family. But when the empire, where his family lived in, took away all of his family's possessions to help fund his battle, he resented it and killed an agent of the empire. He was imprisoned for it in the dirtiest prison. He started a riot with his fellow inmates and they escaped. Now he is the leader of an assassin cult.

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Th words "giant" assasin cult doesn`t please me sorry... I mean you can`expect to be godmodding people and executing prople as you wish everywhere okay?

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PostPosted: May 26th, 2006, 10:27 am 
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Could I join? :)

Name: Kellian Thrusain

Age: 120

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Position/Profession: Fighting [And living, I guess :P]

Appearence: Tall, willowy figure with black hair that she keeps up in a pony tail witch reaches her shoulders

Clothes: Red sleeveless leather jerkin and knee-length black skirt [Too hard fighting in a dress :-D]

Weapons: Two long swords and a short dagger

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PostPosted: May 26th, 2006, 3:48 pm 
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Everyone is welcome, please remember people we start from very humble beginnings its not like we can start a continental war. You can be an independent adventurer and go with the flow or start your own river by taking control of some lands. (think up a way that your char can get to power unless he already somehow is)

For those whom are going to start from the field filled with dead bodies, you char can find my char and his sister if you want..

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PostPosted: May 26th, 2006, 11:17 pm 
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Icitis peered at the cold Nauskal land and smelled the cold air. His league was a fairly large group but they needed armor and weapons. A scout he sent eariler came up to him and said, "My lord, I saw a small village over near the coast. It has everything we need but....the elder isn't too cooperative."
"Anyone that he might hold dear to, anyone we can kidnap and bargain with?" Icitis immediately asked.
"I don't think so," the scout said.
"We'll kill the elder and take control of the village. Kill anyone that will pose a threat to us as well." Icitis ordered. "Our operations begin at four hours after nightfall."
"Yes, my lord," the scout said and went off.

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Name: Kith

Race: Shapeshifter

age: 23

profession:staying alive

apearence: Arabic. Tall, muscular, and dark complection

weapons: Daggers, and the shape he assumes

History: Belonged to a desert nomadic tribe of shapeshifters. He was taken as a slave when he was young, and a mage locked his powers of shapeshifting, except for a few usful ones. However, he had spirit within him and did not submit well. He was taken by his master to fight to aid him in his fighting. As the scene became bleak, his master unlocked his powers and told him to fight for him. Kith immediatly rebelled and killed his master. Others saw this and ran to the fallen man's aid, Kith escaped, but ran into the battle field. He had to fight for ihs life to survive. He was badly injured.
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Kith tried to stand up, and a fresh wave of pain hit him. A sudden shout got his attention, and he perred up just in time to see a final battle. A young girl, fighting for her life, stabbed a manin the gut. He dropped his weapons, and fell to the ground. The girl abouve him started to weep. Kith took a deep breath, and formed an idea. As a child he had seen large beasts, elephants they were called. He figured that if he shifted to that shape, the ingury would be less severe for a larger animal. He did so, though it felt odd to shift to an unacustomed shape. The injury in his side was still extremely painful, but he could manage to walk. He abled over to were the woman was, and placed his nealy aquired trunk oher shoulder.


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Alariel didn`t move yet dried tears.

"Whatever you want it`s not here, the war is over so piss off and leave me and my brother alone..."

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