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Post subject: Help Me Help Her See Posted: June 7th, 2006, 4:51 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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I've been praying lately, & I God has put it on my heart to tell a few of my friends about my faith. But for some reason, this can be kind of difficult for me. So, I wrote this poem. Hope u guys like it!!
Help me, Help her see Lost and alone, Scared and afraid. She wants to know Of the price that He paid.
I want to tell her, want her to see. But I can’t help but ask, Does it have to be me?
What will I tell her? What will I say? Look, this is God. Trust in him and pray?
What if she laughs, Or thinks that I’m strange? What if she thinks That it’s too late to change?
Forgive me for doubting, But Lord, I just don’t see Why I have to be the one to tell her; Why it has to be me.
But then I remember What I’m trying to claim. I’m trying to tell her To trust in your name.
So I’m taking a leap of faith. I know that you’re here with me. God, please give me strength. Help me, help her see.
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Post subject: Posted: June 7th, 2006, 5:21 pm |
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Joined: 30 March 2006 Posts: 5406 Location: Alabama, USA
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i started to cry when i read this, if its OK with you, i want to put this in my photo album!
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Post subject: Posted: June 7th, 2006, 6:58 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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OMG! Princess Kade of Narnia, wow, gosh.  I don't know what to say. Thank you. Of course you can put it in your album! This poem comes straight from the heart with me. It's SO hard to talk to people about your faith sometimes. I'm glad you liked it so much.
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Post subject: Posted: June 7th, 2006, 8:03 pm |
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Joined: 04 June 2005 Posts: 11221 Location: In a world of magic and mystery Country:
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Wow! That's just beautiful and it rings so true. It's so wonderfully expressed. I don't know what else I can say. Great job!!! 
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AWESOME set by the AMAZING Lembas!!!
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Post subject: Posted: June 8th, 2006, 1:09 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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thanks 
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Post subject: Posted: June 9th, 2006, 6:28 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Ditto! Excelent work.  And hope it all works out for you.
(Man I am away for a bit and you write several poems. lol But that's a GOOD thing. Just keep writing your doing great!)
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Post subject: Posted: June 10th, 2006, 6:04 am |
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Joined: 24 June 2005 Posts: 3759 Location: Berlin Country:
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What a beautiful poem.. good job I really love it 
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Post subject: Posted: June 10th, 2006, 3:53 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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lol. sry, Jax!!  you know, it's weird, b/c i've never been very good 2 poetry b4 b/c i think i tried 2 hard! lol 8) If it's a subject (like this 1) that i feel strongly about or can realte 2, it just.....happens. *shrugs*
Thanks, Fíriel_18190. I appreciate the comments. 
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Post subject: Posted: June 10th, 2006, 9:12 pm |
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Joined: 01 January 2006 Posts: 3183 Location: Lothlorien
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That is so true and well written, pip&leggyluvr. I appreciated it a lot, you are an excellent poet 
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Thanks Haldir and Gil! "You said: I know that this will hurt, but if I don't break your heart then things will just get worse..."
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Post subject: Posted: June 11th, 2006, 12:07 am |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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thanks. it definately comes straight from the heart. 
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Post subject: Posted: June 11th, 2006, 5:06 pm |
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Joined: 01 January 2006 Posts: 3183 Location: Lothlorien
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Well, that is the best kind of poem!
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Thanks Haldir and Gil! "You said: I know that this will hurt, but if I don't break your heart then things will just get worse..."
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Post subject: Posted: June 11th, 2006, 10:40 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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lol. u know it!! 
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Post subject: Posted: June 16th, 2006, 11:38 am |
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Wow..that was really good...i love it....5 stars 
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Post subject: Posted: June 16th, 2006, 8:27 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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aw, thanks.  I really appreciate the input u guys. i'm glad u like it!! 
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Post subject: Posted: June 17th, 2006, 8:16 am |
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Joined: 14 June 2006 Posts: 47 Location: Legends Place
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great poem! Really!
you know, I'm reading much poems to learn from others,
and you inspired me just now! Thanks!
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Post subject: Posted: June 17th, 2006, 2:17 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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aw, thanks. Well u can thank Jax for that, b/c he's the 1 that inspired me!! lol 
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