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Post subject: Help a poem by Leaha  Posted: April 9th, 2006, 12:01 am |
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Joined: 30 March 2006
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Helping her through
was holding her back
When he came to her
She cried
" Dont make me leave
I have a need"
And a path cleared the way
But as she looked up
Fealing a tear
Stain her pale face
She looked up to see
What was the need
In Heaven or in Hell
He cried down to her
For he knew she was in pain
" Leave them in my arms
For they shall find a way"
With that she left
One last breath
The line went straight
Sorry bout the cusing I normaly dont do that but the poem basicly wrote it self. Yeah and if you dont get it go and read sickness by me yet again
_________________  "Holmes is a little too scientific for my tastes -- it approaches to cold-bloodedness"
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Post subject: Posted: April 9th, 2006, 10:48 am |
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that was beautiful, hun... i wish i could write liek that 
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Post subject: Posted: April 10th, 2006, 11:26 am |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Great job, 
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Post subject: Posted: June 11th, 2006, 12:21 am |
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Thank YOu to the top with you
_________________ "Holmes is a little too scientific for my tastes -- it approaches to cold-bloodedness"
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