Hoping to fly
Throughout the sky
Holding me back
An imageless force

Its source
I am sad to say
Is what I am trying to escape.

Though I try
I am to admit
That all birds cannot fly.

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"Holmes is a little too scientific for my tastes -- it approaches to cold-bloodedness"

It's an awesome poem Leaha, it reminds me of penguins!!!! It's really cool rhyming dude

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A very interesting rhyme scheme. Pleasure to read. Keep writing.

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yeah, a nice poem indeed, I really like it

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Thank You this is one of my personal favorites.... I need to put all my poems on one thread....

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"Holmes is a little too scientific for my tastes -- it approaches to cold-bloodedness"

I like it!

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Faith isn't the ability to believe long and far into the misty future.
It's simply taking God at His Word and taking the next step Joni Erickson Tada