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Post subject: Unseen Emotion  Posted: July 8th, 2006, 6:07 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005
Posts: 19521
Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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"Unseen Emotion"
There it is again,
Floating on the wind.
A haunting image love,
That hunts me down again.
It's image white as snow,
As through the night we go.
Entangled in this snare,
Of lies that say "I care."
But I can't see anymore,
I can't hear anybody.
Am I living still,
Will my heart fill?
When I'm driving down the road,
I can't see where to go.
I can't remember how to drive,
I just know that it's alive!
Is it real or is it me,
Why can't I see?!
I'm so preoccupied,
Distracted and denied.
There it is again,
Floating on the wind.
And I wonder is it real?
Because it now is all I feel.
I can't hold it or touch it,
I can't see it or be with it.
But somehow I feel it's an option,
If I really want it.
And there it is again,
Floating on the wind...
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Post subject: Posted: July 9th, 2006, 5:59 pm |
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Joined: 15 January 2006
Posts: 1730
Location: Next to you *poke*
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Thats a beautifull poem!
I love it! _________________ 
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~Thank you to Estë Undómë for the Beeeautiful Banners & Avvie <3 ~
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Post subject: Posted: July 9th, 2006, 10:12 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006
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Location: The Shire
Gender: Female
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OMG, I luv that Jax!! It's so awesome!! Wow, u have such a way w/ words.....i can kinda relate to that poem, 2. Nicely done. (as usual;))
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Post subject: Posted: July 10th, 2006, 2:28 am |
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Joined: 15 January 2006
Posts: 1730
Location: Next to you *poke*
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I agree  _________________
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~Thank you to Estë Undómë for the Beeeautiful Banners & Avvie <3 ~
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Post subject: Posted: July 10th, 2006, 3:26 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005
Posts: 19521
Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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 Glad you liked it. And yeah... that's one I wrote from personal experiance. It's cryptic in relation tomy own experiance but it gets the point across good enough to satisy me. lol
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Post subject: Posted: July 10th, 2006, 4:20 pm |
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Joined: 30 December 2005
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Gender: Female
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I love it, as always. It's beautiful, Jax!!
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Post subject: Posted: July 11th, 2006, 10:57 am |
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Joined: 08 January 2006
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Location: The Shire
Gender: Female
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i agree!! it's awesome!! (as usual) _________________
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: July 16th, 2006, 3:14 pm |
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Joined: 05 July 2006
Posts: 18
Location: The Old Navy of Gondor
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Okay, Jax, I'm on a roll to read all your poetry!!!! I really like htis one, especially how you return to the theme "There it is agian..." a few times. I like that idea. Good poetry! (and I do hope htis post is not too antiquated for my comments, if so, I crave pardon.)
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Post subject: Posted: July 17th, 2006, 2:40 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005
Posts: 19521
Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
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Well, it's there to read. I am just glad you guy slike it and that God makes it come out as good as He does.
And your post is fine, it is after all, your post.
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Post subject: Posted: July 21st, 2006, 5:46 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006
Posts: 3132
Location: The Shire
Gender: Female
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*bump*  _________________
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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