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Is this a good plot?
Yea, its very exciting! 58%  58%  [ 7 ]
Its Alright 42%  42%  [ 5 ]
Dunno 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Nah, not really 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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PostPosted: July 16th, 2006, 11:08 pm 
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As the plane moved on, Erik reassured Sounder, saying, "No one said that they didn't like you." Noticing his uneasiness, he commented, "Relax, this flight will be over before you know it." He waited until everyone was settled in and then he began, "Ok, Kahisan is in a hotel in Nice. The two rooms adajacent to his has been reserved for us: Claire and I will stay at one room, you two at the other. We need to sneak into his room to put a bomb under his bed's mattress. Sounder, could you get us a key to his room? We need surveillance on him, when he comes in, when he goes out. When the time comes, I will shut the lights off and began going down. Claire, wait five seconds then detonate the bomb. Everything clear?"

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Sounder racked his brain.
He said queitly" in a hotel it should be easy if its an actuall key... Not one of those cards, someone else will have to do it if its cards. To technical......,but I should be able to do it "
Sounder looked out the window and saw a hawk floating next to them.
He muttered something in French in admiration to how pretty the bird was. He relaxed a bit more, but not a lot

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Marisa heard someone calling and dragged herself away. She saw a weak stream up ahead and hurried, the best she could, for the water.

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Keira sprinted in Marisa's direction, desperately trying to find the girl. She threw the gun in a rage, denting the metal.

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Marisa felt so weak, even though she'd drank from the stream she felt like she would never walk again. She sat in the dry soil and sobbed, sobbed for herself, for her father, for her boyfriend and for the baby she was carrying.

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(*gasps* pregnant Marisa! :bounce: )

Marisa did'nt notice, Keira stepped out from the shadows and raised one loaded uzi at her face.
"Up!" she ordered, she knew her target was upset, but she did'nt care. "I said get up!!"

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(I know, bet you didn't see that coming......and niether did I until about 3 seconds before I wrote it.) :roll:

Marisa kept looking at the ground and didn't get up.

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Cool!

Keira spat, some pathetic girl wasnt going to waste her time, she bent down and lashed out at Marisa, slapping her hard across the cheek.
Keira reached out and grabbed Marisa's collar, pulling her towards her and shoving the barrell of the uzi at her head.
"Are you going to get up?" snarled Keira, tightening her grip on Marisa. "Or do i have to force you?"

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"Shutup." Keira said calmly. She was in no mood, blood mixed with tears and sweat dripped down her face. She eyed Cortez.
"Don't point that thing at me.." she said angrily.

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Keira snarled, she pushed Marisa away and jumped upwards, knocking away Cortez's gun with her own uzi.
"I said dont POINT THAT AT ME!" she growled. It was one of those days, Keira knew Cortez was a friend, but her anger just kicked in, venomous rage flowing thru her blood.

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"What would Eva do then eh?" smirked Keira. She knew she was breaking the rules, but she could'nt control her anger, never could. I really need those anger management classes the docter offered she thought to herself.

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Marisa put th gun down and looked up at them both. She thought she saw something other than hate in Cortez's eyes but she couldn't be sure. She stood up, still eyeing Keira's gun suspiciously.

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Keira sighed and breathed hard, taking long deep breathes.
"Come on then." she whispered to Marisa, holstering her Uzi and taking hold of Marisa's sleeve gently.
Keira did'nt know what was going on, she felt so tired all of a sudden.

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The anger came flooding back.
"Fine!" she yelled, letting go of Marisa. "I try so hard to control my anger! but it never helps with you around!"

"Keira!" came a voice. She span round, hearing her name.
There stood a prety girl with a dirty blood covered face, limping towards her, a great bullet hole gourged into her shin, her leg a shiny sticky red.
"Amber!" cried Keira. "What the hell happened?"

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Marisa let herself be taken by the arm by Cortez who seemed somewhat more humane than the others. She was hot, thirsty and suddenly trembling although she didn't know why exactly.

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