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Is this a good plot?
Yea, its very exciting! 58%  58%  [ 7 ]
Its Alright 42%  42%  [ 5 ]
Dunno 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Nah, not really 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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PostPosted: July 16th, 2006, 3:11 pm 
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Marisa heard a lot of noise going on and ran even faster and further away from the souce of the sound. Her legs were scratched from the brambles and she had a cut on her cheek from where a branch had whipped across it. Everything about her hurt, she felt so faint and thirsty....

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Keira picked herself up and spat the blood away.
"Hold them off!" she yelled to the others.
She crouched over a dead SAS guy and wrenched grenades and an M4A1 from him, then began sprinting the way Marisa went.
"Marisa!" she cried. "Come here!"

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(ok Leaha, this is the news, you and me are being sent with two deathbringers to kill 5 muslim terrorts about to blow up Jerusalem. We are going to take them out. We've been breifed by Eva (the leader) and we are now at the trasports, we've got all our gear and we seem to be getting to ok with the Deathbringers)

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(Ok Thanks!!!!!1)
SOunder looked at the Deathbringers.
'Odd they don't look like killers' he stated to himself.

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Ydal turned on him with a look of horror, this had to go well which ment he had to keep his mouth shut "Neither do we" she hissed silently

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(Darrell?.... *sighs* Where is he?....)

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Claire smiled at Sounder's remark and responded, "Which makes our job easier." She climbed in the driver's seat while Erik settled in the passenger seat. They got to their base in about ten minutes, where they led him to a private airport with a private plane and Marcus waiting for them. "Erik, Claire," Marcus immediately said. "We have everything ready for you."
"Good to hear that, Marcus," Erik answered. They began boarding the plane when Erik turned to Marcus and said, "Well, good-bye." The door to the plane closed and the group of Death Bringers and Darklights made their way to the French Death Bringer base.

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(*waiting......*)

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Sounder looked at Ydal
" Hmph, If they don't like me fine. I know 102 way to kill people with a spoon..." He said to appsoloutly no one.

He walked uneasily into the plane. He had never been in one before.He sat down and gripped to the bottom of his seat tensing up his whole body .

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As the plane moved on, Erik reassured Sounder, saying, "No one said that they didn't like you." Noticing his uneasiness, he commented, "Relax, this flight will be over before you know it." He waited until everyone was settled in and then he began, "Ok, Kahisan is in a hotel in Nice. The two rooms adajacent to his has been reserved for us: Claire and I will stay at one room, you two at the other. We need to sneak into his room to put a bomb under his bed's mattress. Sounder, could you get us a key to his room? We need surveillance on him, when he comes in, when he goes out. When the time comes, I will shut the lights off and began going down. Claire, wait five seconds then detonate the bomb. Everything clear?"

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Sounder racked his brain.
He said queitly" in a hotel it should be easy if its an actuall key... Not one of those cards, someone else will have to do it if its cards. To technical......,but I should be able to do it "
Sounder looked out the window and saw a hawk floating next to them.
He muttered something in French in admiration to how pretty the bird was. He relaxed a bit more, but not a lot

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Marisa heard someone calling and dragged herself away. She saw a weak stream up ahead and hurried, the best she could, for the water.

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Keira sprinted in Marisa's direction, desperately trying to find the girl. She threw the gun in a rage, denting the metal.

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Marisa felt so weak, even though she'd drank from the stream she felt like she would never walk again. She sat in the dry soil and sobbed, sobbed for herself, for her father, for her boyfriend and for the baby she was carrying.

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(*gasps* pregnant Marisa! :bounce: )

Marisa did'nt notice, Keira stepped out from the shadows and raised one loaded uzi at her face.
"Up!" she ordered, she knew her target was upset, but she did'nt care. "I said get up!!"

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