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Post subject: Twilight (Poem)  Posted: July 27th, 2006, 8:26 am |
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So I just wrote this down the other day. What do you think?
Twilight
Faint dreams as reflection, whispers calling for me
No hope, no love
Just a memory, skies filled with stars and sunsets reflecting in sea
Long I have dwelled in darkness
Only lies, only mistrust
You taught me to live, laugh, love, curing my blindness
Yet short we lived these happy times, a shadow came over us
The sorrow, the loneliness
Bearing the pain of a broken heart of the one I could trust
Longer I will linger, even further away
Just grief, just pain
Guidance of your love will never lead me astray
In twilight...
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O children, lift up your voice, lift up your voice,
Children, rejoice, rejoice..
It doesn't matter you don't believe in God, He believes in you.
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Post subject: Posted: July 27th, 2006, 9:08 am |
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YEAH! YOU DID IT! See, you not bad! I told you!
I love it. It's very mysterious  *makes a mysterious face*
Sam _________________ <center>
Can't take the Kid from the Fight take the Fight from the Kid
engaged to Tyson Ritter-my love forever
<a href="http://www.dance-to-this-beat.net"> Dance to this Beat</a>
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Post subject: Posted: July 27th, 2006, 9:12 am |
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Thanks Sam  I didn't really thought it to be good or something..
Thanks!  *hugs* _________________
O children, lift up your voice, lift up your voice,
Children, rejoice, rejoice..
It doesn't matter you don't believe in God, He believes in you.
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Post subject: Posted: July 27th, 2006, 9:40 am |
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Joined: 02 July 2006
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Keep up the good work! I was looking for some comments on my other piece...the vietnam thing...if you have a moment
sam _________________ <center>
Can't take the Kid from the Fight take the Fight from the Kid
engaged to Tyson Ritter-my love forever
<a href="http://www.dance-to-this-beat.net"> Dance to this Beat</a>
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Post subject: Posted: July 27th, 2006, 11:37 am |
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I shall look it up!  I have to go now, but tonight I'll look at it. (I noticed it was almost an A4 of text so I have to read it when I've time)  _________________
O children, lift up your voice, lift up your voice,
Children, rejoice, rejoice..
It doesn't matter you don't believe in God, He believes in you.
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Post subject: Posted: July 27th, 2006, 11:40 am |
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Thankies! Keep up the good work!
Sam
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Can't take the Kid from the Fight take the Fight from the Kid
engaged to Tyson Ritter-my love forever
<a href="http://www.dance-to-this-beat.net"> Dance to this Beat</a>
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