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Post subject:  Posted: August 31st, 2006, 9:46 pm |
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That is awesome about the club! We don't have anything like that at our school and it is hard to start one. All the maintenance...
As for poetry, my English teachers says "that I have a talent which I should persue." I feel specail!  I have a Pirate-like song goin.' Here it be:
Now ye wonder where ye go’n
And what yer go’na do.
Well, I tell ye straight and quick,
If ye list’n to.
Ye’re go’n on the sea of a rabid storm
Ye’re go’n sail with me through the morn.
Ye’re go’n and ye may die,
But as long as ye do it righ,’
Ye’re go’n ter be jus' fine!
Now ye wonder where ye go’n
And what ye’re go’n do.
Well, I tell ye straight and quick,
If ye list’n to.
That be it! It's not done yet, but I will get around to it.
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Post subject: Posted: August 31st, 2006, 10:46 pm |
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I liked that WD! That was really original and creative. It was fun to read. It brought out the pirate in me. _________________ Made by Meganelf
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Post subject: Posted: August 31st, 2006, 11:17 pm |
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I like the poem, Wandering Darkness! Very piratey! lol
That's awesome about the school club!
I like writing stories better than I do poems. I'm not quite sure why, I do like coming up with characters, figuring out plots, settings, etc. I write poems occasionally, but not very much.
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Post subject: Posted: September 1st, 2006, 12:17 am |
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Thank you very much. My problem with stories is that I have wonderful characters and plots but I have an extremely difficult time ending stories. I don't think I have ended any story I have written. Peoms are easy to begin and end. I don't need to go into detail and such. It just is.
WD 8)
PS: I will have post some of my better poems. If you thought my Pirate Sea-Shanty was good, these are pretty awesome; if I do say so myself. Though there is hidden meaning that many people do not understand so the poem doesn't make much sence, it's just there.
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Post subject: Posted: September 1st, 2006, 6:25 pm |
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nice poem!
Captain Jack wrote: I like stories better than poems, mostly because my poetry isn't all that good. XD
Ooh! I just remembered. This year for school, there's going to be a club called Teen Ink. It's for students who like to write to get together, write, talk about writing (kinda like this club, eh? XD), and work toward publication! Exciting! XD
isn't that a large national newsletter/magazine-type thing? I happen to read it every month it comes out _________________ 
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Post subject: Posted: September 2nd, 2006, 2:48 pm |
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Eeek!! I haven't been to this club in forever!! So sorry!!! 
Anyway, does anyone mind if I put in a prompt idea?? An idea for one came to me the other day. It is to write something using as much punery/word play as possible.
Anyway, just an idea... 
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Post subject: Posted: September 2nd, 2006, 5:41 pm |
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That's a cool prompt! I'll try to come up with something.
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Post subject: Posted: September 2nd, 2006, 5:54 pm |
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That is a cool prompt! But I think that might be a little tricky for me. I'm not all that quick-witted of a person so...this might be a challenge.  _________________ Made by Meganelf
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Post subject: Posted: September 2nd, 2006, 7:48 pm |
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Lady Dark Moon wrote: nice poem! Captain Jack wrote: I like stories better than poems, mostly because my poetry isn't all that good. XD
Ooh! I just remembered. This year for school, there's going to be a club called Teen Ink. It's for students who like to write to get together, write, talk about writing (kinda like this club, eh? XD), and work toward publication! Exciting! XD isn't that a large national newsletter/magazine-type thing? I happen to read it every month it comes out I dunno. Maybe it is. I guess I'll find out on friday. ^_^ _________________ 
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Post subject: Posted: September 4th, 2006, 12:39 pm |
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^they have some nice editorials and opions in there as well.
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Post subject: Posted: September 5th, 2006, 1:56 am |
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I was going to post some of my really great poetry, but I wrote it with Word and my new computer doesn't have it yet so I can't open it. You guys will just havve to wait... Sorry! 
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Post subject: Posted: September 5th, 2006, 2:03 pm |
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jeepers, i haven't been on for a long time!! sorry guys! so how is everyone doing? better than me i hope, i'm sick. but i'm working on a few of my songs to keep me from boredom. does anone want to see my RD of one of my many new songs? i need some feed back. _________________ 
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Post subject: Posted: September 5th, 2006, 2:12 pm |
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i cant believe i havent joined this club! can i join? i love to write!
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Post subject: Posted: September 5th, 2006, 2:14 pm |
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Sure! I would like to!
Oh! I have Microsoft Office now! Yay! Here is the poem that I wanted to share a long time ago but couldn't. I had to write it for my English class. It ended up being very good. It's a Personification peom. We had to take an emotion and personify it. this is what I came up with.
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Peace and Harmony
The soft winds blow,
The mystic waters flow,
The wanderlust vines ever grow.
Softly treading on Mother Earth,
Nymphs and Fairies dance its girth
Unwavering with Princess Joy and Prince Mirth
And then all stops so suddenly,
The abundant parade of monotony,
Hooray! Here come Queen Peace and King Harmony!
Of multicolored foliage do the Royals dress,
With flowing hair that the waters ever caress,
And ageless starry eyes that show no worry, anger or stress.
Nature blooms upon their wake,
Enduring truths they do make,
That here evil shall never take.
For Peace roams here free,
Under the Evergreen tree,
Hand in hand with Harmony.
And when the feast comes to pass,
Around the table the party does amass,
And they begin to sing again at last.
For parities here are common,
Joy and Mirth are ever rampant,
Queen Peace and King Harmony are always Triumphant.
The soft winds blow gently,
The mystic waters flow freely,
And the unbreakable vines ever grow.
For Peace roams free here,
Under skies so starry,
Hand in hand with Harmony.
Thar ye be! Enjoy.
WD 8)
PS: I have other poems, so if you want me to share more I will, but I have published many of my poems so I have the legal rights to them. No stealy!!!  _________________ Previously Wandering Darkness
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Post subject: Posted: September 5th, 2006, 2:19 pm |
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Wandering Darkness wrote: Sure! I would like to! Oh! I have Microsoft Office now! Yay! Here is the poem that I wanted to share a long time ago but couldn't. I had to write it for my English class. It ended up being very good. It's a Personification peom. We had to take an emotion and personify it. this is what I came up with. Quote:
Peace and Harmony
The soft winds blow,
The mystic waters flow,
The wanderlust vines ever grow.
Softly treading on Mother Earth,
Nymphs and Fairies dance its girth
Unwavering with Princess Joy and Prince Mirth
And then all stops so suddenly,
The abundant parade of monotony,
Hooray! Here come Queen Peace and King Harmony!
Of multicolored foliage do the Royals dress,
With flowing hair that the waters ever caress,
And ageless starry eyes that show no worry, anger or stress.
Nature blooms upon their wake,
Enduring truths they do make,
That here evil shall never take.
For Peace roams here free,
Under the Evergreen tree,
Hand in hand with Harmony.
And when the feast comes to pass,
Around the table the party does amass,
And they begin to sing again at last.
For parities here are common,
Joy and Mirth are ever rampant,
Queen Peace and King Harmony are always Triumphant.
The soft winds blow gently,
The mystic waters flow freely,
And the unbreakable vines ever grow.
For Peace roams free here,
Under skies so starry,
Hand in hand with Harmony.
Thar ye be! Enjoy. WD 8) PS: I have other poems, so if you want me to share more I will, but I have published many of my poems so I have the legal rights to them. No stealy!!! lol, i won't steal them!!  _________________
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Post subject: Posted: September 5th, 2006, 2:33 pm |
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I don't expect anyone a part of this club or this forum to steal them, but outsiders.... ya never know...
WD 8)
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