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Post subject: "Time To Die"  Posted: October 10th, 2006, 4:05 pm |
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"Time To Die"
Forever,
Forever sinking in drifting sand,
Clasped tight in my hand.
Always,
Always there to pull me down,
There for my soul to drown.
Falling,
Falling through the fading sky,
Falling as my life flies by.
Be careful of the words you use,
For they may be your last.
Be careful you do not abuse,
For life can end so very fast.
It's to late for me,
I can not now ask why.
But I ask you will you be,
Ready when it's time to die?
Last edited by Jax Nova on October 13th, 2006, 4:46 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post subject: Posted: October 10th, 2006, 8:37 pm |
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That was a very deep and powerful message... I like your writing, it's very unique. I'd love to see more poems like this in the future.
Gosh I wish I could say more, but you've left me speechless. I've never seen something written so powerfully, and with such clarity.
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Post subject: Posted: October 11th, 2006, 9:48 pm |
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Wow....this message is very very near & dear to my heart....soemthing that I can really relate to....It almost made me cry....Someone in my class in 7th grade died, & it made me realize that u really don't know when you'll die....this is also when I really became close with God.....so I can really relate to it.... basically, I loved it....I don't know what else to say. You've left me speechless as well with this one, Jax. Amazing. Just.....wow......
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Post subject: Posted: October 13th, 2006, 4:49 pm |
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Well, I have thought abut this subject a lot and it amazes me sometimes how so many people always asume that they are going to be alive the next day.
Infact I take it to the point that I try not to even tell somone I will be somewhere. I try and say I will do my best to be there. Because I think if you get so used to it you just start living like there is always going to be a tomorow... lol sorry I will quite the long explination now. And as always glad you both liked it. 
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Post subject: Posted: October 13th, 2006, 8:23 pm |
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Ur right....u really don't know if you'll be here tommorrow........u know....if anything ever did happen to me....I want u guys 2 know....I mean, Jax & Arwen, that u've helped me SO much....I've just gotten out of a rough period in my life....one where I didn't have very many friends....but no matter wut, u guys were always there for me....whenever i was sad or upset, u guys would remind me about God...that He was there.....although i hate to admit it, I'm human  So therefore, I sumtimes 4get God....but u guys always reminded me about Him......I've nvr seen u guys b4 in my life....& I probably never will....but that doesn't matter....basically, what I'm trying to say is thank you. So much....sry, didn't mean to go all deep & everything.....but ur poem got me thinking again, Jax....so thank you so much. I love you guys!!  _________________
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: October 16th, 2006, 5:16 pm |
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Appreciate it all and very glad I could help.
And it goes both ways. you guys have both been there for me through some real tough times and you at times were the only friends i had. And I appreciate SOO VERRY much all that you have done for me and all your encouragement.
Love you both. And hope that I can help you both and continue to do so far into the future.
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Post subject: Posted: October 16th, 2006, 6:27 pm |
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Wow, thsi is really awsome
And after reading a little bit what you said, it's true, you know what, I might die right now..as I type this...in a minutes, in an hour in three years, in the next 20 minutes, you NEVER know. And it's telling me to live life to it's fullest, you never know and that's why you have to take risks in life.
Great job, don't mind if I copy and paste some of this onto my binder, with proper credit of course, do you?
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Post subject: Posted: October 17th, 2006, 5:04 pm |
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Jax Nova wrote: :) Appreciate it all and very glad I could help. And it goes both ways. you guys have both been there for me through some real tough times and you at times were the only friends i had. And I appreciate SOO VERRY much all that you have done for me and all your encouragement. Love you both. And hope that I can help you both and continue to do so far into the future. *wipes tears from eyes* *hugs Jax & Arwen* You're so welcome! I'll always be here for you, Jax. Same goes to you, Arwen. & once again, thank you guys SO much!! There are things that I could NEVER tell other ppl, that i tell u guys! *hugs again* thx for being my inspiration, my shoulder to cry on, & my friend to laugh with. I really appreciate it, from the bottom of my heart.
Love,
Me
(I'm not aloud 2 tell ppl my name online....mom's paranoid like that...lol...but it didnt seem write to put pip....so the closest thing to my real name, is me. lol Thx again. ) _________________
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Post subject: Posted: October 19th, 2006, 4:08 pm |
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Mrs.Gamgee wrote: Wow, thsi is really awsome
And after reading a little bit what you said, it's true, you know what, I might die right now..as I type this...in a minutes, in an hour in three years, in the next 20 minutes, you NEVER know. And it's telling me to live life to it's fullest, you never know and that's why you have to take risks in life.
Great job, don't mind if I copy and paste some of this onto my binder, with proper credit of course, do you? Yeah, that pretty much sums it up. I tend to find myself thinking about that frequently. *shrugs* Sure I don't mind if you do. pip&leggyluvr wrote: Jax Nova wrote: :) Appreciate it all and very glad I could help. And it goes both ways. you guys have both been there for me through some real tough times and you at times were the only friends i had. And I appreciate SOO VERRY much all that you have done for me and all your encouragement. Love you both. And hope that I can help you both and continue to do so far into the future. *wipes tears from eyes* *hugs Jax & Arwen* You're so welcome! I'll always be here for you, Jax. Same goes to you, Arwen. & once again, thank you guys SO much!! There are things that I could NEVER tell other ppl, that i tell u guys! *hugs again* thx for being my inspiration, my shoulder to cry on, & my friend to laugh with. I really appreciate it, from the bottom of my heart. Love, Me (I'm not aloud 2 tell ppl my name online....mom's paranoid like that...lol...but it didnt seem write to put pip....so the closest thing to my real name, is me. lol Thx again. ) Ditto. I know it might seem like the same thing over again but hey waht can I say.
Just glad to help and is ever so appreciative of all you guys have done!
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Post subject: Posted: October 19th, 2006, 10:04 pm |
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that was a strong message, spoken with simple clarity. I've heard this question often... humans, especially youth, often believe themselves immortal. it wasn't so much as the way you wrote it, but the way you expressed it in such a short and simple message.
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Post subject: Posted: October 20th, 2006, 2:19 pm |
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Thanks. I find myself thinking about this quite often it seems. lol
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Post subject: Posted: October 20th, 2006, 5:29 pm |
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I think we all do....or at least i do, as well. _________________
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: November 3rd, 2006, 1:43 pm |
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Wow. Jax, the poem is amazing. It resonates with such power and is so eloquently expressed. Great job! _________________ 
AWESOME set by the AMAZING Lembas!!!
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Post subject: Posted: November 4th, 2006, 3:51 pm |
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Thanks. glad you liked it. I kind of think though it's the subject that seems to have the effect on people more than the way I wrote it. It's a pretty thought prevoking subject usually. lol
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Post subject: Posted: November 4th, 2006, 5:29 pm |
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Wow, that's so powerful. And such a good message. I love it.
And thanks for all you said, Pip!!!  And right back at both you and Jax- you guys are always there for me, and I don't know what I would do with out you. Really. You guys mean so much to me, and help me through all the hard times. Thanks soooooooooooooo much!!
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Post subject: Posted: November 5th, 2006, 12:12 pm |
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*hugs Arwen back* OMG, UR WELCUM & THANK U!!! :hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug:
U mean so much 2 me, as well!!! Thank u, thank u, thank u!!! *hugs 4 like the 50th time* Idk wut i'd do w/ out u guys! Ur the best!! _________________
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