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Post subject:  Posted: November 29th, 2006, 3:29 am |
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Paris was becoming fatigued from the blood he was loosing from his chest wound. The hot morning sun beat down hard on his skin, making it feel like it was burning. Paris panted heavily and jabbed his sword toward Menelaos' heart.
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Post subject: Posted: November 29th, 2006, 12:28 pm |
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Menelaos was dizzy from the heat, and he already was exhausted from their fight. So he wasn't quick enough to react as Paris aimed his sword at his chest, the sword dug into his shoulder as he tried to turn away.
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Post subject: Posted: November 30th, 2006, 3:04 am |
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Finally! Paris smiled slightly at his first accomplishment in the battle. "That was for Helen!" he said horsely. "You shall not have her! She is mine!" he said angrily as he looked back up toward the balcony. He tottered a little, almost loosing his balance.
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Post subject: Posted: November 30th, 2006, 10:49 am |
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"You hit me once, and this battle still is going on. As is the war! Helen is not yours, she's my wife!" Menelaos said. He was angry, his new wound burned and the heat was terrible for him.
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Post subject: Posted: December 1st, 2006, 2:59 am |
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"She will never be yours again! She loves me not you! You disgusting filth!" Paris yelled angrily. He raised his sword over his head and ran toward Menelaos.
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Post subject: Posted: December 1st, 2006, 8:12 am |
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Menelaos just stepped to the side so that Paris wouldn't be able to turn fast enough and raised his sword to block Paris'. "This is no matter of love! But she's married to me, so she belongs to me!"
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Post subject: Posted: December 1st, 2006, 10:53 pm |
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(tehehe!!!)
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Post subject: Posted: December 3rd, 2006, 2:30 am |
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Paris roughly reached forward and grabbed Menelaos by the hair and said, "Love is stronger than belonging to someone! And she loves me, not you!" His eyes shot back toward the balcony to look at the woman he loved.
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Post subject: Posted: December 3rd, 2006, 5:26 am |
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Menelaos stayed calm. "As I said, it is no matter of love! And I'll win over you, get used to this thought!" he spoke and then broke free of Paris' grip.
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Post subject: Posted: December 3rd, 2006, 11:18 am |
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Helen stared into Paris' eyes for a breif moment. Her eyes glistening with the love and fear she had for Paris at the moment.
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Post subject: Posted: December 4th, 2006, 3:11 am |
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As Paris lost his grip on Menelaos' hair, he tripped over Menelaos' foot and landed on his back. Sand kicked up into his eyes, blinding him from anything for a moment or so. Flinching, he tried to get up....unsuccessfully.......rubbing his eyes furiously.
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Post subject: Posted: December 4th, 2006, 4:14 pm |
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Menelaos grinned evily when Paris suddenly landed on the ground without him doing anything. "You really make it easy for me!" he said and raised his sword to finally kill Paris.
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Post subject: Posted: December 5th, 2006, 2:51 am |
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Paris still could not see from his eyes, since they were still covered in sand. He then lost grip of his sword and with his right hand tried to feel around for it in the hot sand. He felt so helpless and fearful at the moment. Backing away, but at the same time trying to feel for his sword, Paris began to whimper like a frightened child.
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Post subject: Posted: December 5th, 2006, 2:07 pm |
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Menelaos let his sword swiftly fall down towards Paris chest. He was glad that this moment has come at last.
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Post subject: Posted: December 5th, 2006, 5:03 pm |
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Paris opened his eyes at the last second, to find Menelaos' sharp sword heading toward his heart. He gasped and then instantly rolled over out of the way, but as he did, the sword caught the back of his leg and sliced it open. "Awww!" Paris shrieked at the sudden pain that had now crippled his leg.
Looking back toward Meneloas, he could see the sword of Troy off to the right of Menelaos' body. His eyes twitched for a second and then he dragged himself toward the sword helplessly like an injured dog.
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Post subject: Posted: December 5th, 2006, 5:13 pm |
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((When will we kill Menelaos? I don't know what to write anymore, somehow it's always the same... ))
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