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Post subject:  Posted: December 5th, 2006, 5:15 pm |
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(LOL! Menelaos reaches Paris before he can grab the sword and is ready to slice his throat, but Paris flees like a coward and runs toward his brother Hector for protection. Menelaos finds this amusing, until Hector steps in to save his brother....and kills Menelaos. LOL! Got it now?)
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Post subject: Posted: December 5th, 2006, 5:29 pm |
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(yup thats what happens. Menalois says, "COWARD!!" then he looks up at helen "IS THIS WHAT YOU LEFT ME FOR!!" and then he tells hector that he would kill paris at his feet. When hector does not answer Menalouis goes in for the kill when hector whips out his sword and stabs him in the stomach.)
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Post subject: Posted: December 6th, 2006, 1:50 am |
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(lol Okay, thank you!  )
Menelaos realized what Paris was after: His sword. He had dropped it a little earlier. Menelaos pushed his hand away and was ready for the last heavy blow, to kill Paris. _________________ <center> 
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Post subject: Posted: December 6th, 2006, 3:37 am |
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(LOL! Thank you, hobo! You know the movie quite well. I've actually only seen it once!)
Paris grunted in pain and slowly looked up to Menelaos with fear. He remained at Meneloas' feet and shook from head to toe. His eyes were filled with horrified tears.
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Post subject: Posted: December 6th, 2006, 1:55 pm |
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Menelaos moved his sword towards Paris' throat and was ready to kill him.
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Post subject: Posted: December 6th, 2006, 5:08 pm |
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(yep!! always willing to help. Right about now Agamemnon says "The Trojans have violated the agreement! Prepare to attack!" then when hector stabs menalouis it goes silent and you see menalouis fall to his knees in slo-mo and then it goes back to a close up of Agamemnon and in slo-mo again he screams "CHARGE!!!!" (i like that part) and then paris limps back to get the sword of troy and hector brings his horse to him)
Patrclis got up from his sitting postion and leaned on the edge of the cliff and squinted. He gasped at Menalouis going in for the kill.
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Post subject: Posted: December 7th, 2006, 3:58 am |
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Paris remained frozen and swallowed hard. Was this it? Would he just die here in front of Helen and two large armies? His eyes met those of Menelaos and he quivered in fear.
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Post subject: Posted: December 7th, 2006, 12:30 pm |
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Menelaos hesitated for a few moments to kill Paris, and looked into his eyes for some seconds. He then shortly shook his head and turned to Paris again and prepared to kill him.
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Post subject: Posted: December 7th, 2006, 3:53 pm |
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Paris took the last chance he had and decided to make a cowardly run for it. He tried to stand, but then fell and before he knew what he was doing, he found himself crawling and his hands and knees to his brother, Hector.
No words were spoken between the two as Paris latched onto Hector's leg like a frightened child. He did not want to die....not yet.....he was too frightened of death...of pain......
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Post subject: Posted: December 7th, 2006, 6:10 pm |
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((I would like to wait for Hector to post...))
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Post subject: Posted: December 7th, 2006, 9:09 pm |
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(this is awsome!!!)
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Post subject: Posted: December 8th, 2006, 3:51 am |
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(We're waiting for you, Canion.)
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Post subject: Posted: December 8th, 2006, 2:35 pm |
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((Waiting and waiting...))
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Post subject: Posted: December 8th, 2006, 5:19 pm |
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Helen gripped the balcony until she heard the soft voice of King Priam. He was telling her something but she couldn't understand a word she was saying. She watched Paris fall like it was slow motion, everything now was just a blur the only solid object was her love that was currently looking defeated.
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Post subject: Posted: December 9th, 2006, 2:46 am |
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"Brother....p-p-please.....help me. Please....brother...please..." Paris said with a shaking voice. He could hear the footsteps of Menelaos approaching closer. His grasp around Hector's leg became pitiful looking.
Paris never looked to Helen, his mind was now fully occupied on his life.
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Post subject: Posted: December 9th, 2006, 6:45 am |
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Menelaos came after Paris. "Coward!" he called him. Then he looked up to the balkony where Helen was standing. "Is this what you left me for, Helen?"
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