so i told arwen a long time ago that i'd write a poem about time, & i did....& that's as far as i got...then 2 weeks ago i was like oh yea, gotta type that up....& now, after like, oh, idk, 2 months, i'm finally posting it! yay! lol so anyways, let me know wut u think Comments are appreciated as usual!

Time

Time.
The Past.
Wishing
that I,
just for a moment,
could go
back.
Could stop myself
From saying
Those words.
could
erase
that moment
forever,
so that
no one
would
remember.
Could start
over.
A clean slate;
A new page.
But I
can do
no such thing.

Time.
The Present.
Stuck.
Not able
to go back,
Not able
to go
forward.
Simply
stuck
in time.
What is,
becomes
what was;
What will be,
becomes
what is.
The present
becomes
the past;
The future
becomes
the present.
We stand still.
But time,
goes on.

Time.
The Future.
The unknown.
The feared.
What will be;
What is
to come.
Will our dreams
come true?
Or
will they
be crushed?
Will the ones
that we
care about
and love,
be here still?
Will we
still be here?

Time.
The Past.
The Present.
The Future.
Time.
No matter
what happens
time
will always
go on.
Live life
to the
fullest.
Have no
regrets.
Because
time will
stop
for
no one.

One day,
one day soon,
we won’t
be here
any longer.
You never know
when
the end
will come.
So live it
Up.
You don’t
have
much
Time.

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

Awasome! *thumbs up* Loved it.


I think has egsactily what needs to be said on the subject. And it doesn't go over board but it doesn't seem to leave anything out either.

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Visit The Varsian Kingdom!

thanks I was kidna ify on it....glad ya like it!

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

I love it!! You made all of the comparisions so well. I also like how you broke up and compared the past, present, and future. Well done.

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"Hogwarts will always be there to welcome you home."

thanks! Once again, sry it took so long 2 post! lol

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

Well, some of the best ideas come over lon periods of time.

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Visit The Varsian Kingdom!

Very true. It's wonderful, Pip.

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"Hogwarts will always be there to welcome you home."

that is very true, Jax thanks again u guys!

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."