Well, I don't usually write free verse but that is just how this one turned out. Hope you all like it.


Something,
Nothing,
One thing,
Everything.

A kaleidoscope of good and evil,
That spirals down the banks of the rivers.
It turns the waters to blood,
And none escape it's claws.

Death,
Life,
Barely living,
Barely dead.

A haunting image of love and hate,
A bleeding image of sorrow cold.
But on it's tongue are words so cruel,
As it bends down and whispers, "I love You."

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i like it....a lot....it's very....idk, interesting. u dont usually do free verse...i think this is the 1st 1 that i've ever read that u've done, & i really like it...i luv how it ends w/ i luv you....-shivers- it gives me chills....excellent job, as usual. keep it up

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Jax... why did you put this in the Misc. Randomness....

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Thanks pip. Glad you liked it. Like I said though... it just kind of flowed out that way so i wrote it down in free verse. And I do believe that it is the first one I have done.




..... I saw that in here and asked myself the same question.... I was sure I posted this in the poetry section. Yeah shows you what a 3 nights lack of sleep can do for you!

I guess I will ost../. RE- post it in the poery sction. (just wait some how it will end up being the LOTR_RPG section... *sighs* gish...

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That was confusing. But really neat at the same time.

Like me. Minus the neat part.

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I really liked it in a weird kind of way. The way you ended it, it gave me creeps.*shivers* It was nice though.

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One boy....
One dragon...
A world of adventure.

I like it... just beautiful... just a little bit.. ehm... weird? strange?
what ever. I like it!

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lol yeah, it is a bit strange I will admit that....

But I am strange so I am told and I always like strange things *shrugs* Strange isn't it? lol ok shutting my trap now,

But glad you all liked it!

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Rnt we all strange, though? if we werent, we'd be.....normal. ew. tee hee. once again, great poem Jax. keep it up

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