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Post subject: "The Directions of Life" (G) Posted: January 3rd, 2007, 12:45 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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"The Directions of Life"
Calling from the east,
The winds are blowing.
Blowing strong and shrill.
Falling from the west,
The fire is growing.
Growing hotter still.
Sweeping from the north,
The oceans cry their tears.
Crying from the sky.
Striking from the south,
With the storm comes rolling fears,
Rolling right on by.
But always from above,
His grace is shining down.
Shining from His glory.
There in all His love,
He wears Hi's heavenly crown.
That tells the age old story.
He's there for everyone,
No mater who you are.
Now matter what you've done,
Or how deep the scar.
He is always there!
Last edited by Jax Nova on January 4th, 2007, 3:50 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post subject: Posted: January 3rd, 2007, 8:31 pm |
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wow I loved it it was great..
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Post subject: Posted: January 4th, 2007, 12:24 am |
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Joined: 07 June 2005 Posts: 5272 Location: Texas
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Post subject: Posted: January 4th, 2007, 9:15 am |
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Joined: 02 January 2006 Posts: 5728 Location: Mithlond Country:
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That's a really cool poem, Jax.
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Post subject: Posted: January 4th, 2007, 3:49 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Thanks for the comments guys.  And glad you liked it. 
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Post subject: Posted: January 4th, 2007, 4:11 pm |
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Joined: 04 June 2005 Posts: 11221 Location: In a world of magic and mystery Country:
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Jax, that's awesome! I love the imagery you used. You expressed your meaning so well. Great job and keep it up! 
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AWESOME set by the AMAZING Lembas!!!
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Post subject: Posted: January 5th, 2007, 2:27 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Thanks. 
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Post subject: Posted: February 2nd, 2007, 9:09 pm |
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Joined: 30 December 2005 Posts: 2901
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Beautiful imagery. I love it. 
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"Hogwarts will always be there to welcome you home."
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Post subject: Posted: February 3rd, 2007, 3:36 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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As always glad you liked it. 
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Post subject: Posted: February 5th, 2007, 11:53 am |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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eek! u've posted like 3 poems that i havent reade! -dies- lol I luv this one! It does a great job of getting the point across....a point that is very true. Keep it up. 
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Post subject: Posted: February 5th, 2007, 2:51 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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lol Yeah I posted a bunch lately. glad you liked it as always. 
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Post subject: Posted: February 5th, 2007, 8:24 pm |
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Joined: 30 December 2005 Posts: 2901
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I know, I was surprised to see a handful of poems I hadn't read yet. Sorry it took me awhile, Jax. 
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"Hogwarts will always be there to welcome you home."
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Post subject: Posted: February 6th, 2007, 2:39 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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lol that's fine. It's not like you guys are obligated to read my poetry.
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Post subject: Posted: February 6th, 2007, 5:06 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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i might as well be. I'm adicted. lol 
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Post subject: Posted: February 6th, 2007, 8:02 pm |
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Joined: 30 December 2005 Posts: 2901
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Yep, me too. 
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"Hogwarts will always be there to welcome you home."
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Post subject: Posted: February 7th, 2007, 3:54 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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lol well I always appreciate your guys' comments. 
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