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 Post subject: My Poetry Book (Sample)
PostPosted: February 7th, 2007, 4:00 pm 
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As some of you know I have published a book of poetry so I thought I could post one of the poems out of it on here kind of like a preview or something.

If you are interested I have posted something about my book in the "Your Life" Section on this forum.

The book is divided into three subjects, Spiritual poetry, Miscellaneous poetry and Fictional poetry. This poem will be from the Fictional poetry. :) Hope you like it

But here is the poem


“MYSTIC LAND OF OLD” By Jason Hein from the book Inspired Poetry

In a mystic land of old,
Seven kings stand frozen cold.
Deep inside their hearts of gold,
Seven stories lay untold.

In their mouths are words of wonder,
That carry out strong as thunder.
Of the riches they did plunder,
And the curse they now are under.

Now their bodies turned to stone,
Hearts to gold and clothes of bone.
All around the world has grown,
The winds of time all well blown.

Never were their stories told,
Of their boxes full of gold.
How they braved the trials bold,
In that mystic land of old.

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Wow, that's great!

I like it a lot, like the rest of your poetry.

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Thanks. :)

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Wonderful Jax! It sounds like it could be a preface to a fantasy story or a medieval story. I love the rhythm of the poem and the piece is so eloquently expressed. Great job as usual! :-D

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Thanks. :) And yeah, that is how most of my poems are from the Fictional section of my book. lol I really enjoy writting those kind for some reason it's just fun.

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