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Post subject:  Posted: January 28th, 2007, 5:34 pm |
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^oh, i really, really like it! It's so...cool!!!! I love that one! Great job Mel!
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Post subject: Posted: January 28th, 2007, 8:15 pm |
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Awww thanks Tur!  Feedback is always, ALWAYS appreciated! _________________ 
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Post subject: Posted: January 29th, 2007, 4:30 pm |
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Are there any spots left?
If there are then here's my entry:
A Poet's Love
Passion flowing from trembling quill,
In the silence stilling the heart-beat,
Crafted anguish sharpening lead,
Lust curling cursive with flowing heat.
Sapphire marring forgotten pages,
Beauty trapped in haunted rhyme,
Verses screaming wanton whispers,
From another forgotten, enraptured time.
Romances strewn ‘cross tattered pages,
Softly echoing ink-stained cries,
Waken a heart that now lays motionless,
Before all faith in love truly dies.
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Post subject: Posted: January 29th, 2007, 9:22 pm |
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Meldawen wrote: Awww thanks Tur! Feedback is always, ALWAYS appreciated! Your most welcome!  _________________
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Post subject: Posted: February 1st, 2007, 2:59 pm |
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k, whoever forgets to send in their poems..its their loss.
ah..and I cant do a round 3, cuz Im soo busy and barely get on sometimes.
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Post subject: Posted: February 2nd, 2007, 9:33 pm |
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i'm kind of lacking inspiration right now, so here's one i wrote a while back:
Trapped
Not trapped by bars or lock and key,
No prison cell or guards for me.
Instead I’m trapped inside my head
With only fear and me to dread.
This lonely world feels small and grey,
No hint of joy or sign of day;
No silver moon or stars on high –
Nothing there but cold, bleak sky.
I long to feel the joy I see
In everybody else but me,
But all I feel is loneliness,
Too tired to eat, too weak to dress.
I cannot seem to shake the fear
That this, my life, will end right here.
My demon self won’t let me go
And I can’t beat it, that I know.
The walls I raise I cannot see
And yet they seem so real to me.
They tower above my lonely soul
And leave me trapped in this black hole.
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Post subject: Posted: February 3rd, 2007, 11:23 am |
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Hi, Err can you maybe add me to the list of entrants please...? My poem is above ^^
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Post subject: Posted: February 3rd, 2007, 1:39 pm |
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TrueNarnianForever wrote: k, whoever forgets to send in their poems..its their loss.
ah..and I cant do a round 3, cuz Im soo busy and barely get on sometimes.
If you give me some ideas.... I could take over it for you. _________________ <center>
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Post subject: Posted: February 3rd, 2007, 2:00 pm |
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k, I marked u guys down.
yeha, if u did want to Nightingale, u could do that.
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Post subject: Posted: February 4th, 2007, 7:06 am |
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Yuppers, I'll do it!
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Post subject: Posted: February 4th, 2007, 4:05 pm |
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thanks...TN... haha...XD
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Post subject: Posted: February 4th, 2007, 4:08 pm |
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haha, i didn't see that!  _________________
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Post subject: Posted: February 5th, 2007, 4:19 pm |
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yeah, I'm going to have to drop out of this one, sorry. Crazy schedule. Sniffs.
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Post subject: Posted: February 7th, 2007, 12:27 pm |
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You'll finish this one, tho, right, TNF?
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Post subject: Posted: February 7th, 2007, 2:13 pm |
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Post subject: Posted: February 9th, 2007, 7:11 pm |
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man. 
Ill be gone till about late March, early April. the DL is tomorrow, so I suppose ull have to carry the contest on without me.
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