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Post subject:  Posted: March 15th, 2007, 11:57 am |
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"Paris... they are in love!" She shouted back but let him go. She then watched as Paris's sister dropped to her knees, embracing Achilles as if she was never going to let him go. But Achilles insisted and pushed the girl away from him with one last I love you. It broke his heart to see love torn apart but she knew it was for the best. When Paris and his sister came up the steps she helped the girl and together they ran off through the city
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Post subject: Posted: March 16th, 2007, 2:25 am |
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Greek soldiers were soon on the top level. Paris could hear the shouts and clanking of swords. "Hurry! We must hurry!" he insisted to the two girls.
Eventually, they reached the secret tunnel and Paris pushed the two girls in first before himself.
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Post subject: Posted: March 17th, 2007, 2:51 pm |
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"Paris... come on" Helen shouted from within the tunnel, she handed Paris's sister the torch and told her to lead the way as she waited for Paris to join them
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Post subject: Posted: March 18th, 2007, 12:44 am |
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(Ummm...uh hem...... I know you're going to kill me for this, but....where does the story go from here?)
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Post subject: Posted: March 18th, 2007, 12:02 pm |
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[no i wouldn't kill you... from here the movie no longer follows Paris and Helen, it shows the pyres burning with Achilles body, so i think now it is up to us]
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Post subject: Posted: March 20th, 2007, 3:20 am |
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(I see....oh boy....if ya have any ideas, you can PM me ok?)
Paris continued throught the tunnel behind his sister and his love. Turning to look over his shoulder now and then, just to make sure there were no Greeks following.
Whispering, while running, Paris said, "The end of the tunnel is near. We will soon be free, but not for long. We must find a way out of Trojan territory."
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Post subject: Posted: March 20th, 2007, 4:35 pm |
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"How long do we have to go?" She asked, she could still hear the fighting in the distance and it was pretty hard to miss the fire and smoke coming from the city of Troy and if they wanted to get out of Trojan territory they would have to be even farther.
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Post subject: Posted: March 20th, 2007, 10:30 pm |
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Paris pushed on and breathed heavily from running, "The end of the tunnel is near. Come quickly!"
Eventually, Paris, his sister, and Helen exited the tunnel. In the distance behind them, was the burning city of Troy. Paris felt tears reach his eyes as his lifelong home and family were all destroyed. Turning to face Helen, he fell to his knees and wept in the dry cold sand.
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Post subject: Posted: March 24th, 2007, 1:03 am |
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(Small bump..)
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Post subject: Posted: March 25th, 2007, 2:22 pm |
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Turning around to see the city of Troy was one of the most painful things she had ever seen. It was day now and above Troy black shrouded the city creating a darkness that was sure to be seen by anyone who was alive in that city. She could see dust billowing around the one side of Troy where the walls had finally fallen, and deep in her heart she knew this was her fault. She was the bane of Troy.
Falling to her knees beside Paris she brought his head to her chest and kissed the top of his head, no tears were seen in her eyes for she had no more to shed.
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Post subject: Posted: March 26th, 2007, 1:12 am |
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Paris felt the soft warm embrace of the woman he had ever loved and hugged her back. His tears fell onto her arm and he wept even more. Paris' heart ached for his father and brother who were now dead by the hands of the Greeks. In his mind, he cursed them all for what they had done to his people, family, and home.
Standing slowly to his feet, he placed one arm around Helen's waist and began to walk with her across the long sandy desert before them. "The only way to freedom is to walk many miles across this barren land. We may not live to make it, my love, but there is no other hope."
He then turned to his sister and grasped her hand in his.
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Post subject: Posted: March 29th, 2007, 2:39 am |
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(Bump...sorry..)
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Post subject: Posted: March 30th, 2007, 4:14 pm |
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Helen only had an inkling of what Paris felt, she had lost some people she knew in the war, but no one like the loss of a brother and a father. Watching Paris caused her heart to break but she had to be strong if they were to survive.
Helping Paris to his feet she cuddled up agaisnt his right side while Paris's sister took the left, both of them leaning agaisnt Paris for moral support as they began the treacherous walk through the barren land, the sky becoming dark from the smoke of the burning of Troy.
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Post subject: Posted: March 31st, 2007, 12:16 am |
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Three days had now passed and there was still no sight of a dwelling or village. The sun never retreated during the day and the cold never disappeared during the long nights.
Paris' throat was parched and he licked his chapped bloody lips. "We will find shelter....we will......." he said to the two women with him. His walk was becoming staggered and weak.
Just then, Paris' sister collapsed behind him into the burning sand.
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Post subject: Posted: April 1st, 2007, 4:43 pm |
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After three days of nonstop walking Helen could feel her feet burning in the sand and her throat tighten from lack of liquid, but she trudged on if only to be close to Paris and his sister. She knew in time that they would find a safe haven and that is all she could think about.
"Oh Paris..." She said softly seeing his sister fall to the ground as he own body felt so weak she crumbled down nex tto the girl
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Post subject: Posted: April 2nd, 2007, 11:34 pm |
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Paris turned to find both women in the sand. Walking toward them with a strong swagger, Paris knelt down next to his sister. Lifting her head to rest on his lap, he said, "Don't worry my sister. Everything will be all r---"
Paris' eyes shifted uneasily as he felt her body completely limp, "Sister?" He watched her chest.....but it did not rise or fall. "No....sister?!" Placing his hand over her chest, he felt for a heartbeat, but none came. "No, no, no......" Paris began to lose himself as his eyes glazed over with tears.
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