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Post subject: A Lament Posted: February 28th, 2007, 11:29 am |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Ok.... lol this is something I wrote up last year when I was really bored. It's kind of crazy/stupid so bear with me.
Theres a boy I know who's been everywhere,
To the pyramids in Egypt and cross every sea.
From the Amazon river to the desert bare,
China, and Hongkong, and up to DC.
Well, just last night he flew to the moon,
He's been traveling since the day of his birth.
I'm surprised to see him home so soon.
He caught a flying star on his way back to earth.
Australia gave him a warm welcome too,
He thought he might go back again.
He took home a pet kangaroo,
And kept it in his rhinoceros pen.
Well, he sailed the oceans for a year or so,
Dove to the bottom found treasures of gold.
But you see now hes got no where else to go,
He doesn't want sit around and grow old.
So he formed an expedition to Atlantis today,
Where he found it last year on the ocean floor.
He figured that would be a good place to stay,
Since he cant travel much anymore.
He didn't want me to tell anyone where he was,
No one would listen if I did anyway.
But I decided to write this poem because,
This young man went away today.
Said something about the earth's central core,
And a heat resistant drilling machine.
So, he called me up once more,
To watch over all his pets and things.
I'm putting food in the water dish,
And water in the food pan.
I'm scraping food to all the fish,
From month old dog food cans.
The bathrooms flooded because the water is running,
And I'm in pain because the stingray is stunning.
Theres muddy footprints on the floor,
Because I left open the third back door.
And I just can't take it anymore!
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Post subject: Posted: February 28th, 2007, 7:07 pm |
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Joined: 07 June 2005 Posts: 5272 Location: Texas
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This has an odd Dr. Suessy feel to it, excellent!
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Post subject: Posted: March 1st, 2007, 12:26 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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lol thanks.
I personally thought it was pretty weird but I figure why not post it anyway? *shrugs* thanks for the read and comment.
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Post subject: Posted: March 9th, 2007, 7:36 pm |
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Joined: 30 December 2005 Posts: 2901
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I like it.  It's nothing whatsoever like what you usually write, but I completely agree- it has an awesome Dr. Seuss aspect to it.  It's still very good. 
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Post subject: Posted: March 10th, 2007, 12:41 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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lol thanks.
Yeah, it's a lot different from what i usualy write.
Just every once in a while I end up writting something that is completely different from mynormal. ButI think that's a good thing, it helps me stretch my limits.
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Post subject: Posted: March 10th, 2007, 12:47 pm |
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Joined: 30 December 2005 Posts: 2901
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Yes, I agree. It's great to be able to write a huge variety of things. 
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Post subject: Posted: March 17th, 2007, 6:01 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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haha, i luv it! it's cute! sumtimes u gotta take a break, & write a fun crazy one....lol keep it up! 
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Post subject: Posted: March 19th, 2007, 9:59 am |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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lol yeah.  Thanks pip!
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Post subject: Posted: March 23rd, 2007, 5:24 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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no prob 
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Post subject: Posted: April 6th, 2007, 12:10 am |
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Joined: 24 March 2007 Posts: 504 Location: My own little world
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I needed a fun and whimsy poem. 
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Post subject: Posted: April 6th, 2007, 5:02 am |
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Joined: 17 October 2006 Posts: 2763 Location: England
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That's really good  I like it a lot - it is really Dr. Seussy, isn't it!
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Post subject: Posted: April 6th, 2007, 10:56 am |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Thanks both.
lol Everyone seems to say it's like DR. Sues I guess that's a good thing. *shrugs*
Well thanks for the comments as always! *waves*
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