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PostPosted: March 25th, 2007, 7:38 pm 
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^oh that's nice too! well for the contest you're going to have to pick one, but your choice :)

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I have my entry! *waves bit of parchment* :P Actually, i wrote this awhile ago, but since you said it could be pre-written (as i remember) I decided it would suffice. ;) lol... It's from my own point of view (as opposed to that of a character's), tho it's to a certain character...Frodo, in fact. (Bet that took you by surprise. ;) J/kidding, lol) There are rather a lot of Elvish placenames and such, so ask and I shall define then non-English words. ;) But anyway, here's my entry.

Dawn Dream

At the break of the day, as we stand in the Dawn,
I will sing with the Sun at her rising:
On a high-lifted hill, neath a sky silver wan,
You will know you're the light of my prizing!

Ever more I will sing--let us wing to Bright-heaven:
Arda's glades cannot keep those who leap to the sky!--
On this shore, all our song can't belong, deeply graven:
Endor fades--all is white--dearest light, let us fly!

With a silvery song, see the Star of the Morn--
Like the light of my heart, she is singing:
Like that spark, you're my star, as the shadows are shorn,
And for you in the light I am winging!

Let us seek for the West--there to rest, lost from Ambar:
Middle-earth we forsake--billows break, white with foam--
Worn and weak, Earth may fall--yet her all, we'll remember--
On the Firth, starlight gleams--lost in dreams, let us roam!

Like a wind of the sky, winged child of Light,
You and I were not born for this waning:
Let us wing through the stars as a gleam silver-white,
Where the mist glimmers grey, softly raining--

Let us rise--long we pass silver glass, bright and blissful:
Watch the Dawn set her light on the white Mountain-tine!--
To the skies--Valmar's bell--Earth's farewell, wan and wistful:
Sunrise yon glimmers far--Elvenstar, let us shine!

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^o0o very nice!
Ok everybody--please try and get your entries in soon!!

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Thanks! *goes into standby mode* :P

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Forget me. I can't think now.

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Here's a poem I literally wrote in five minutes. :P I just don't seem to have time any more to get detailed. Schools driving me nuts.

MOON GUIDE
Moonlight blossoms
Soft under foot
Line the path that leads me home
How far I roam

Drenched in moonlight
The path winds on
Yet tarry I not
For the moon guides me home

Weary of war
And yearning for love
My soul cries for morn
Trapped as the dove

Light of the moon,
Guide me home!


I owe the whole moon bit to having just watched an episode of my favorite childhood anime, Sailor Moon. :D hehe. And 'home' is not refering to an actual house, but more to a man's heart, in this case. And the 'path' is the way to ones heart. And the wars are wanting to get past the confusions and barriers to true honest feelings, of love of course. I used the moon in sort of a symbolic manner; since astrologicially, the moon, the natural ruler of the sign cancer; controls, embodies and represents our emotions.

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^very nice...lets try and get entries in soon okay people!

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I like that, Arien! I think being able to write good blank verse is as much a skill as being able to rhyme. :) Very beautiful and poetic.

*nods with Silme, and continues to stand by* lol...

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Thanks you two! And I really appreciate your comments Eariel. :)

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am I aloud to enter? if so, i'll enter w/ this....if not, it's cool....

kind of odd, not the best....but it'll hafta do...if i can enter....

In His Arms

I look up,
into his eyes.
Like deep pools
of blue.
He takes my hand,
and holds it tight.
I know that
now,
I am safe.
Fear
is but a vague
memory,
When his hand
touches mine.
All my worries
and fears
are cast
Away.
For I know
that I am safe
In His Arms.
Slowly,
he brings his hand,
to my face.
Carefully,
he brushes away
the tears.
Gently,
he puts his arms
around me.
Everything
that I ever
wanted,
Lies here,
In His Arms.
I open my mouth;
I want to tell him
of my
Love.
I want to
confess
to him
my feelings.
But he puts a finger
to my lips,
and shakes his head.
Slowly,
he leans
forward.
Quietly,
he whispers
in my ear.
Little
by little,
his smile
Spreads
to my lips.
Tenderly,
he leans
forward.
Eventually,
our lips
touch.
Passionately,
he kisses me,
and I,
Kiss back.
And I am safe.
In His Arms.

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PostPosted: April 25th, 2007, 12:55 am 
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Oh, i love that! It's so sweet, and romantic, tho not just in the usual way, there's kind of something more, an innocent/childlike quality, if you know what i mean?
You're welcome, Arien. :)
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You're welcome.
So, is anyone else going to enter, or what? :confused: *bump*

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Great, but i guess we better wait for Silme to confirm that's okay... I wonder where she is?

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