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Post subject: Admiral Beau's Lament (PG) Posted: April 4th, 2007, 4:20 pm |
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Joined: 12 December 2006 Posts: 1977 Location: Soul Society
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This is a poem about my freinds horse, Admiral Beau. He die 2 Octobars ago. Please Comment.
The barn is abanded,
the pastures are empty
the young spring fillies have long grown old.
The grass withers as the wind roles by:
a voice so solf and sad it cries.
And under the trees,
the old apple tree
there stands a wood cross
of our greatest loss
for he has faded into the mist
of Autumn’s snow-white Winter shift.
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Post subject: Posted: April 7th, 2007, 12:10 pm |
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Joined: 12 December 2006 Posts: 1977 Location: Soul Society
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Anyone going to comment?
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Post subject: Posted: April 7th, 2007, 3:35 pm |
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Joined: 24 March 2007 Posts: 504 Location: My own little world
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I like the poem. Very solemn.
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Post subject: Posted: April 26th, 2007, 4:27 pm |
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Joined: 22 April 2007 Posts: 579 Location: Heaven on Earth
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I loved the poem. Bravo, very good job, Murtagh.
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Post subject: Posted: April 27th, 2007, 5:27 pm |
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Joined: 03 January 2006 Posts: 13134 Location: Canada Country:
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gorgeous, very well written, and im sorry for your loss.
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Post subject: Posted: April 29th, 2007, 1:29 am |
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Joined: 24 February 2007 Posts: 1811 Location: In my library, unconvering dark and mysterious secrets...
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Ohh, that's so sad!!! I love horsys and to think another one died...
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Post subject: Posted: April 29th, 2007, 6:12 pm |
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Joined: 12 December 2006 Posts: 1977 Location: Soul Society
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thanks guys.
Beau broke his leg and my friends had to put him down, he was only 26.
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Post subject: Posted: April 30th, 2007, 12:13 pm |
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Joined: 21 August 2006 Posts: 4076 Location: Out Walking
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I know what it's like to have an animal put down. My cat wasn't actually put down, but for the longest time we were preparing to... but then we ended up not having to.
Beautiful poem.
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