This is a poem in a 3, 2, 4, 2 line form. It was written mainly about Draco Malfoy from Harry Potter. However there are some parts that remind me Alot of Faramir from Lord of the rings. It is rated PG for violence.

I lay here and cry
Think of how easy is it would be to die
Because I listen to you lie
Now here I am wainting for love
For you to stop and put me above
I guess that I am to blame
That I bring you shame
I'm the reason my picture doesn't have a frame
I am the reason your hatred came

But all I want is to be your number one
To be your loved son

Hate all around
The rutheless whipsering sound
I'm just waiting to be found
I want all to see the real me
I need you to see what I can be
Why can't you call me son
When I come do you have to want to run
When I do something right do you have to give me a look of stun
Why can't we just have some fun

Because all I want is to be your number one
To be your loved son

I have to bring us fame
I have to honour our family name
Yeah, it's always the same
I want to be free to show what I feel
To let everyone know what is real
Can you see yourself in my eyes
Can you see all the lies
Do my unseen stained cheeks let you know of all my cries
Can you tell that this is just my demise

All I want to be is your number one
To be your loved son

I would give it all
I am forever at your beconning call
Even if I do seem to stall
I cause my own tears
I cause my own fears
I let you cloud my my mind
I let you put my heart to grind
I follow the wishes of our own kind
I take the oaths that bind

Because all I want is to be your number one
To be your loved son

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Destiny I'm a Christian boycrazy girl. Will Turner's wife ^&? Avatar by JF, banners by Taurquende, Nurrantiel Mashiara, Silme Meleth TarNymphadora, and JF taught me how to use banners. Thanks to all!

Hey nice poem, it's sad but I like it it is well written. Nice rymign as well.

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Jax Nova, Thank you very much for reading and the nice comments. I have read some of your poems and you are a wonderful poet. So your compliments really mean alot to me. Anyway thanks again.

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Destiny I'm a Christian boycrazy girl. Will Turner's wife ^&? Avatar by JF, banners by Taurquende, Nurrantiel Mashiara, Silme Meleth TarNymphadora, and JF taught me how to use banners. Thanks to all!

That is so sad, but it flows nicely. I like it.

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Risestel, Oh, thank you. I am glad that you like it. Oh, and I don't think that we have met so...nice to meet you. (shakes Risestel's hand)

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Destiny I'm a Christian boycrazy girl. Will Turner's wife ^&? Avatar by JF, banners by Taurquende, Nurrantiel Mashiara, Silme Meleth TarNymphadora, and JF taught me how to use banners. Thanks to all!