Ok, please be nice.

I've embarked on a piratical adventure into what is known as my first attempt and a Pirates fanfiction. Please follow the link and, if you're nice, leave me a review!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3571573/1/

Thankies Bunchies!

-Turner

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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.

*ish reading*

ooh, very nice!

This time, Teague sighed, “It’s an animal some people eat, son. They make pearls.”

“The people or the oyster?” Jack asked curiously.

^ *dies of laughter* thats great!
so cute and Jack like!

very nice, you have a good start so far!

hehe, thankies. I'm trying to keep both of them as close to character as I can, while giving them one of those precious father-son relationships but not meddling with the relationship shown in P3. It's great to know Jack sounds good an' Jack like.

^I hope that makes sense.

EDIT: I just updated the story with "The Dingy"

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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.

aww, very cute, and love how your tying in his present adventures with each chapter, its a nice touch that ive never come across before, *applauds*

Thanks very much!

I'm sad to say it's on hold for now. I've temporarily run out of ideas and lost my list of ideas I had planned out.

Any help?

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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.

umm... *thinks*... near death experiences?... maybe a run in with a younr Barbossa or soemthing? *shrugs* bone-dry over here.

Well, I know I want to do something with him stealing a sip of rum from Teague, and I definately would like something with freedom.

I was also thinking of a chapter about keys. That unlock things. *lol*

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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.

Those would be really neat... *waits for next chapters*