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Post subject: "No One Needs To Know" --- PG  Posted: June 28th, 2007, 6:17 pm |
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<center>Enjoi!
No one needs to know...
And no one needs to care...
Leave me here in ash...
To wallow in my despair.
No one needs to know...
About my flame or flare...
Leave me here inside my mind...
To quietly learn to share.
No one needs to know...
That I've left my lessons unlearned...
Leave me here with my cold heart...
For it can't bear the burn.
No one needs to know...
About all the tears I've shed...
You don't know what's happened to me...
That I've seen them all fall dead.
And no one needs to know...
How tender I am for you...
They don't need to see I care...
Or they'll count you among the slew.
So no one needs to know...
And no one needs to care...
Leave me here in ash...
While I wallow in my despair.
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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.
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Post subject: Posted: June 29th, 2007, 1:39 am |
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Ooh, I like that a lot. It's rather haunting, and really sweet at the same time.
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Post subject: Posted: June 29th, 2007, 1:23 pm |
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Thanks. That's what I was going for. It's actually from a book I'm writing, from the prince to his love. He's a pretty interesting character, Ean is. He tends to be a little depressing and glum while being arrogant and stubborn.
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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.
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Post subject: Posted: July 2nd, 2007, 3:58 am |
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If you decide to post it, make sure to tell me, I definitely want to read it.
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Post subject: Posted: September 19th, 2007, 4:45 pm |
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Anyone know why all my no's and my's turned to Nay's and Me's? It wasn't like that when I posted it. =[[
How strange. o.0
EDIT: All of the You's were Ye's. =[[
The plot thickens.
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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.
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Post subject: Posted: September 19th, 2007, 4:49 pm |
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1. Very well done, its a nice, well thought out poem, and it flows wonderfully.
2. Due to the fact that its "Talk Like a Pirate Day" that might have something to do with it, no?
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Post subject: Posted: September 19th, 2007, 5:20 pm |
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perhaps, cause it changed my post, too. =]]
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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.
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Post subject: Posted: September 19th, 2007, 7:12 pm |
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It's really nice! (once you put the nays back to n-o's, the bes to a-r-e's and the yes to y-o-us... lol!)
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Post subject: Posted: September 21st, 2007, 7:38 pm |
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Haha, gotta love the randomness that is AU. Yay Talk like a Pirate Day. Anyway, I really love this poem. Glad this thread was revived.
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