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Post subject: Posted: July 13th, 2007, 2:19 pm |
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Joined: 02 October 2006 Posts: 2145 Location: the south, USA
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Okay, I finaly finished my entry. It is based on the scene in Steward and the King (found in Return of the King) page 255 the conversation between her and the houses of healing's warden, it is from Eowyn's point of view, and it is written in a very modern style of lyric writting.
How much more must I take
Can't you see how my heart breaks
If there's any light, then I can't see it
If there's any hope, then I can't feel it
I'm living on the edge
I'm hanging by a thread
I'm knee deep in quicksand
All my hopes, dreams, and all of these things
They are slipping through my hands
Please try to understand
I've cried all alone
I know that I am on my own
But that's right
I'll be fine
But not here
Because
I'm living on the edge
I'm hanging by a thread
All my hopes, dreams, and all of these things
They are slipping through my hands
Please try to understand
I'm a bird in a cage
And all I want is to be released
To find a little peace
Because
I'm living on the edge
I'm hanging by a thread
All my hopes, dreams, and all of these things
They are slipping through my hands
Please try to understand
That this bird has to fly
Fly away
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Post subject: Posted: July 13th, 2007, 2:39 pm |
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Joined: 05 July 2006 Posts: 12949 Location: With her nose in a book Country:
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Wow...that was awesome! I could actually get a beat and make it into a song! I love the words and wow, great job mate!  It was bloody brilliant!
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Post subject: Posted: July 13th, 2007, 9:29 pm |
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Joined: 02 October 2006 Posts: 2145 Location: the south, USA
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Turwaithel Swann, Oh thank you.  I really liked your as well. I loved that it was long and the when you sing it I love how the words just kind of spill out. 
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Post subject: Posted: July 14th, 2007, 8:14 am |
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Joined: 14 July 2006 Posts: 2652 Location: Rivendell, of course
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@Drew's Destiny: Wow! Amazing entry! Thanks for entering! 
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Post subject: Posted: July 14th, 2007, 9:36 pm |
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