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Post subject: Life and Death  Posted: September 10th, 2007, 12:03 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
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Blue skies are falling,
There before your eyes.
Crystal forests dying,
As the whirling wind cries.
The marble moon is falling,
From it's orbit in the skies.
Stars are slowly dying,
As the ocean wails and cries.
But rubies are appearing,
In the sky above.
New born babies are now hearing,
The words of Mother's love.
Sparkling crystals showing,
In the river's tide.
Glass trees are growing,
On the mountainside.
Though death is all around,
Life is there to see.
Portrayed in every sound,
Seen in you and me.
So chose your focus with discernment,
Life or be it death.
For our focus can determine,
Our each and every breath.
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Post subject: Posted: September 10th, 2007, 6:49 pm |
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Joined: 27 February 2006
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Location: My Imagination
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I love it Jax! That's deep! I love your poetry... it's so smooth! What was the insperation for this one?
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Post subject: Posted: September 11th, 2007, 1:53 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Thank you. Funny thing is I usually think my poetry isn't smooth enough... lol
Really, I was just messing around on the computer and suddenly I felt like writing a poem. So I kinda just started writing and this is what came out. *shrugs*
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Post subject: Posted: September 12th, 2007, 8:52 pm |
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Joined: 07 June 2005
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Location: Middle-earth
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Interesting piece. I like the images!  _________________ $%=#?&
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Post subject: Posted: September 13th, 2007, 11:38 am |
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Joined: 04 November 2005
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
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Thanks. Appreciate the comment once again.
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Post subject: Posted: September 18th, 2007, 4:25 pm |
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Joined: 27 September 2005
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Location: Germany
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Wow. That's a really deep and meaningful poem. And I agree, it is also written very smoothly.
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Post subject: Posted: September 18th, 2007, 5:27 pm |
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Joined: 27 February 2006
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Even though I've already commented on this peom, I'd have to say... it brings a new meaning to me suddenly because about a half our ago I was in a car crash... no body died, good thing. But it was scary... So, yeah, that poem has a new meaning, thanks Jax for writing it!
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Post subject: Posted: September 19th, 2007, 11:42 am |
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Joined: 04 November 2005
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Thanks for the comments guys. Always appreciate it. I heard about the crash, I will pray for you and the other's involved.
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Post subject: Posted: September 26th, 2007, 8:41 am |
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Joined: 30 December 2005
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Gender: Female
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Awesome job again, Jax!! I really love this one- it flows so smoothly, and the images are amazing. It is really deep.
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Post subject: Posted: September 28th, 2007, 11:23 am |
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Joined: 04 November 2005
Posts: 19521
Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
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Thanks, glad you liked it as always.
I tried to put some good imagry in there so Iam pleased that people have mentioned that, it means I actually made it close to what I wanted. lol
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