Ok well I have a couple of art exhibits in my school where I need to display one drawing of mine. But the problem is I don't know which one I should display. So I need you to help me. Choose the one that you think is my best one yet. Of course you don't know if it is truly the best since you haven't seen all of my stuff but from the choices I give you. And please, please, give criticism. It can be bad as long as you have a good reason for it. Thank you!
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I chose number one as it "spoke" to me the most when I first looked at it. I'm sure if I can find the direct message in it, but I can definitely see the what you're getting at with it. Everything in that particular drawing seems to have a purpose. It's a very insightful piece. I also like how the only colour is that of the red flower in her hair and the bit on her dress [which I assume was also deliberate]. Very well done.
Well, I told you online what I thought. That I'm between number 1 and number 3. I like 3 because of the colour contrast. It just REALLY grabs your attention. But then there's one, and I think everyone here has summed it up. I think I'm leaning towards that one.
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just a little constructive criticism on #1 here...in all kindness, of course. about the hair... one side is swept around the neck, and should be a bit shorter than the rest. also it seems a bit stiff, I usually draw hair slightly wavy to make it feel more soft. and one more thing... since the globe seems to be a focal point, you may want to outline the arm so it's a little sharper than the other to sort of lead the eye from the face to the globe. Keep up the great work!!
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about the hair... one side is swept around the neck, and should be a bit shorter than the rest. also it seems a bit stiff, I usually draw hair slightly wavy to make it feel more soft. and one more thing... since the globe seems to be a focal point, you may want to outline the arm so it's a little sharper than the other to sort of lead the eye from the face to the globe. Keep up the great work!!