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Post subject: I Love You (PG)  Posted: January 22nd, 2007, 1:46 pm |
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WELL...... *sighs* after absent mindedly posting this poem in the Misc. Randomness section I will post it where I THOUGHT I was posting it before.... lol *needs more sleep*
Well, I don't usually write free verse but that is just how this one turned out. Hope you all like it.
Something,
Nothing,
One thing,
Everything.
A kaleidoscope of good and evil,
That spirals down the banks of the rivers.
It turns the waters to blood,
And none escape it's claws.
Death,
Life,
Barely living,
Barely dead.
A haunting image of love and hate,
A bleeding image of sorrow cold.
But on it's tongue are words so cruel,
As it bends down and whispers, "I love You."
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Post subject: Posted: January 24th, 2007, 10:18 am |
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Whoa... I like that. I don't know what to say about it, though. It's one of those poems that leaves you speechless.
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Post subject: Posted: January 24th, 2007, 12:53 pm |
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I completely agree with The Nightingale.....It's beautiful but morbid.....it's amazing!
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Post subject: Posted: January 24th, 2007, 1:05 pm |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Thanks guys.  Glad you liked it.
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Post subject: Posted: January 31st, 2007, 10:16 pm |
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Thats a great poem Jax! It seems so...hmm..dunno how to put it! Mysterious.
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Post subject: Posted: February 1st, 2007, 6:15 pm |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Thanks.
Yeah it is in a way. Basically it kind of depicts how although love can so often be seeen in such a light manner it's not a small ishue at all. And love can often be a horible thing. It's kind of hard to explain... lol
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Post subject: Posted: February 2nd, 2007, 9:02 pm |
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Great, Jax!! Yes, it is dark and somewhat morbid, but good. Well done.
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Post subject: Posted: February 3rd, 2007, 3:35 pm |
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Thanks.
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Post subject: Posted: February 5th, 2007, 11:57 am |
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Perhaps slightly morbid....but i like that about it....& i like how it's free verse....it just makes it, more...idk....perfect....
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Post subject: Posted: February 5th, 2007, 2:41 pm |
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Thanks. And as always glad you liked it.
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