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Post subject: The Bardic side of Erethror  Posted: April 14th, 2006, 9:22 pm |
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Everyone has a creative side, and I'm no exception! Enjoy my poems, and my 'to come' 'fanfic'. It takes place a few hundred years or so after the LotR ends. Here are some quatrains:
Exiled
From the blessedness of Aman,
And fair Tirion upon Tuna green,
Were banished hence the Noldorin,
For their fiery wrath so keen.
Death
When chill winds blow,
And blackbirds crow,
Cry out in fear,
For death is near
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Post subject: Posted: April 15th, 2006, 8:19 am |
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ooo. Nice and short, and good too. 'Exiled' is very good, and I like it too.
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Post subject: Posted: April 15th, 2006, 12:28 pm |
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Post subject: Posted: April 15th, 2006, 10:54 pm |
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Post subject: Posted: April 16th, 2006, 11:11 am |
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Umm.. Naughty naughty double posting!
But despite that, they are great, short yet effective. Well done!
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Post subject: Posted: April 16th, 2006, 4:03 pm |
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coolio - i like them - i can never bear to read the loooooooooong ones lolz
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Post subject: Posted: April 17th, 2006, 4:53 pm |
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Neither can I, lol! That's why they're short. Also sorry for the double post ^^;;
Anywhoo, here is another one, slightly longer:
Lord of Thunder
Across the heavens he rides,
In his chariot of gold;
Rumbling over darkling clouds,
He's fearless, steadfast and bold.
Wielding his mighty hammer,
Poised above his holy head;
Dragged on in haste to battle,
Foes of Gods and Men are dead.
Eyes of fire, full of dread,
In to war with grim facet:
Lord of Thunder, God of War:
Give praise in the name of Thor!
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Post subject: Posted: April 26th, 2006, 9:13 pm |
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Another poem (hopefully to be part of a song):
Across the Western Ocean,
Beyond the Misty Seas,
Past Enchanted Isles,
And against the Eastward breeze:
You'll come to lamplit quays
In a twilight time;
A harbour in the gloaming,
You'll hear an Elfin rhyme.
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Post subject: Posted: May 2nd, 2006, 10:43 am |
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I really like your poems, Erethor! The one about Thor is awesome.  _________________ <img src="http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb307/pretty_circles/acrosstheuniverse.png"><br><a href="http://www.freewebs.com/cosmicjive">{Hazy Cosmic Jive}}</a>
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Post subject: Posted: May 4th, 2006, 9:20 pm |
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