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 Post subject: The Bardic side of Erethror
PostPosted: April 14th, 2006, 9:22 pm 
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Everyone has a creative side, and I'm no exception! Enjoy my poems, and my 'to come' 'fanfic'. It takes place a few hundred years or so after the LotR ends. Here are some quatrains:

Exiled
From the blessedness of Aman,
And fair Tirion upon Tuna green,
Were banished hence the Noldorin,
For their fiery wrath so keen.


Death
When chill winds blow,
And blackbirds crow,
Cry out in fear,
For death is near

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PostPosted: April 15th, 2006, 8:19 am 


ooo. Nice and short, and good too. 'Exiled' is very good, and I like it too.


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PostPosted: April 15th, 2006, 12:28 pm 
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Thanks, I'll post some more when I get back.

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PostPosted: April 15th, 2006, 10:54 pm 
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Narnia's Saviours
They came from Spare 'Oom,
To save Narnia from doom:
Two Sons of Adam, Two Daughters of Eve,
Aslan's children they would not bereave!

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PostPosted: April 16th, 2006, 11:11 am 
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Umm.. Naughty naughty double posting!

But despite that, they are great, short yet effective. Well done!

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coolio - i like them - i can never bear to read the loooooooooong ones lolz

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PostPosted: April 17th, 2006, 4:53 pm 
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Neither can I, lol! That's why they're short. Also sorry for the double post ^^;;

Anywhoo, here is another one, slightly longer:


Lord of Thunder

Across the heavens he rides,
In his chariot of gold;
Rumbling over darkling clouds,
He's fearless, steadfast and bold.

Wielding his mighty hammer,
Poised above his holy head;
Dragged on in haste to battle,
Foes of Gods and Men are dead.

Eyes of fire, full of dread,
In to war with grim facet:
Lord of Thunder, God of War:
Give praise in the name of Thor!

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PostPosted: April 26th, 2006, 9:13 pm 
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Another poem (hopefully to be part of a song):

Across the Western Ocean,
Beyond the Misty Seas,
Past Enchanted Isles,
And against the Eastward breeze:

You'll come to lamplit quays
In a twilight time;
A harbour in the gloaming,
You'll hear an Elfin rhyme.

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PostPosted: May 2nd, 2006, 10:43 am 
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I really like your poems, Erethor! The one about Thor is awesome. :)

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*bows* I can only say thank-you. Personally I like the one about Thor too. I'm touching up a poem right now, I'll post it soon.

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