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Post subject: DREAMS Posted: July 1st, 2006, 1:20 pm |
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Joined: 25 November 2005 Posts: 4985 Location: I'm everywhere at once. I am currently lost in the land of quotes.
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I dream of a world
of bliss and everlasting joy,
free of pain, suffering, or fear.
What would it be like?
I wonder constantly,
if I had the chance
to live in a world like that
if only for a little while?
Oh, how I wish that I could have that chance!
Please, oh please,
I pray to God,
please give that chance to me!
I want it more than anything,
I hunger and thirst for it.
Please!
My dream has come true,
granted by the grace of God.
Suddenly, I find myself in a strange world,
full of pure blue skies
and fresh long grasses.
The air is full of noises:
chirping of many birds,
a waterfall spilling over a cliff into a lake,
the sounds of conversation close by.
I am spotted and greeted by a woman,
tall with golden hair and blue eyes
dancing with laughter.
The others welcome me warmly
and accept me as one of their own.
It is beyond any doubt that this is the world of my dreams.
But this I have learned:
You cannot truly enjoy happiness
without enduring some sorrows.
In this I take comfort.
I pray to God
that I might return to my world.
The prayer is granted,
and I am back,
writing about the joy of that time.
I am happy,
and now only visit a world like that
in the written word
and in my dreams.
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Post subject: Posted: July 1st, 2006, 4:48 pm |
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Joined: 01 July 2006 Posts: 20 Location: in front of the computer
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Oh my gosh you speak your true thoughts loud and clear right on!!!!
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Post subject: Posted: July 1st, 2006, 10:20 pm |
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Joined: 25 November 2005 Posts: 4985 Location: I'm everywhere at once. I am currently lost in the land of quotes.
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^Thanks for the compliment! 
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Post subject: Posted: July 2nd, 2006, 3:15 pm |
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Joined: 05 January 2006 Posts: 4689 Location: Somewhere dark... *glowy red eyes*
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Kit-Kat wrote: Oh my gosh you speak your true thoughts loud and clear right on!!!!
I agree and you should be proud for doing that, and for putting them in such a lovley form!!
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Post subject: Posted: July 2nd, 2006, 7:20 pm |
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*sigh* it's wonderful. and it's great that you dare put words to your feelings in such a way. I admire you for that! it's a rare gift you have there, you know.
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Post subject: Posted: July 2nd, 2006, 9:25 pm |
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Joined: 25 November 2005 Posts: 4985 Location: I'm everywhere at once. I am currently lost in the land of quotes.
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Thank you so much, everyone! You're all so nice. . . *huggles all* 
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Post subject: Posted: July 3rd, 2006, 6:20 pm |
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*hugs bk*  we're only telling the truth, you know 
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Post subject: Posted: July 4th, 2006, 6:55 pm |
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Joined: 30 December 2005 Posts: 2901
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Very well written- I like it a lot. 
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Post subject: Posted: July 5th, 2006, 1:58 pm |
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Joined: 25 November 2005 Posts: 4985 Location: I'm everywhere at once. I am currently lost in the land of quotes.
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aaawww. . .thanks! 
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Post subject: Posted: July 6th, 2006, 4:21 pm |
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Joined: 06 July 2006 Posts: 49
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Quote: Very well written- I like it a lot.
Well said, that's right.
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Post subject: Posted: July 9th, 2006, 10:27 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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I like it a lot, too!! I wrote poetry as well, & i've just started, & it's very difficult to put emotions into words......sum are harder than others. but u def. seem to have an easy time doing it! Great job, & keep writing!! 
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Post subject: Posted: July 10th, 2006, 5:06 pm |
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Joined: 25 November 2005 Posts: 4985 Location: I'm everywhere at once. I am currently lost in the land of quotes.
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oooooohhhhh. . .*faints*  Too many compliments! Thanks! 
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