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Post subject: "Thinking of You" (PG) Posted: December 15th, 2006, 5:09 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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I know it's hard when the times seem dark,
I know it hurts when the heart feels broke.
I know it's confusing when you touch that spark,
I know it sends chills when you feel that stroke.
But I don't know what to tell you but hold to God.
I'm sorry. I don't know what to say.
All I can tell you is don't let go!
I wish there was more I could say.
I can imagine it hurts when you think about it,
I can imagine it would bring so much pain.
I can imagine your mind is spinning around it,
I can imagine the chill that comes with this "rain"
But I don't know what to tell you but hold to God.
I'm sorry. I don't know what to say.
All I can tell you is don't let go!
I wish there was more I could say.
I am sure there is longing and doubts the same,
I am sure theres emotions running free.
I am sure there is thoughts you can't contain,
I am sure there are things you can not see.
But I don't know what to tell you but hold to God.
I'm sorry. I don't know what to say.
All I can tell you is don't let go!
I wish there was more I could say.
I wish there was more I could say.
I wish I could help you out.
I hope you soon see the day,
When you will figure this out.
Hold on, hold strong.
God will not forsake.
Take hold, Be bold,
God will not forsake.
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Post subject: Posted: December 15th, 2006, 5:24 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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I think that I'm going to cry.....this poem menas so much to me, Jax....thank you....that really just...wow....I really beleive that things will be OK now....I really really do....you don't know how much this means to me....Thank you, so so much....
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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: December 16th, 2006, 4:28 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
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Like I said I am kind of... unable I guess, some times to really say things. But if I write a poem it seems to come out right.
I want to help people, especialy my friends. But like I said I just really don't know what else to say but trust in God. Because He will Never leave you nor forsake you!
I've never been through what your going through... But I am always glad to help.
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Post subject: Posted: December 16th, 2006, 10:03 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
Gender: Female
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I tend to 4get about God….it’s a horrible thing, but I do….I always remmber him, until times get really really tough like this, & then I just…idk….but having u there, telling me, hey God’s here, He’s not gonna leave u. don’t’ 4get that….that means the world to me….so thank u so so much.  for everything. God truly blessed me the day I read ur 1st poem 
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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: December 18th, 2006, 3:04 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Yeah. I have that problem myself some times. But I know it can help sooo much just to know God will never leave you.  And I am glad that He can use me to incourage you as well.
lol I'm glad you got that blessing. Because if you had not I would never have got the blessing of a good friend.
And I probably would have never met Arwen either. So I got just as much blessings from it I think.
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Post subject: Posted: December 18th, 2006, 5:04 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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*hugs* idk wut i'd do if u guys werent here....if God hadn't put u in my life...thank u so so so so much.
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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: December 19th, 2006, 7:39 pm |
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Joined: 30 December 2005 Posts: 2901
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I love it Jax!! I know exactly what you mean- sometimes I can't express what I'm thinking or feeling by just saying it- I have to write it. (Just not usually in poetry form, lol)
You're right... I think that the first poem that Pip and I commented on was "Alone", wasn't it?? I remember how much I loved it, so immediately went and read all of your other poems. 
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Post subject: Posted: December 20th, 2006, 6:38 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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yup. that was def. the 1st 1, b/c i remeber reading it & almost crying, b/c it fit me so much...i could really relate 2 it....& i had just gotten in2 poetry & stuff, & then i read urs & i was like OMG! lol  *sigh* Good times...good memories... 
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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: December 20th, 2006, 11:10 pm |
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Joined: 30 December 2005 Posts: 2901
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Lol... agreed. And I could relate so much to the poem as well. The funny thing is, that since then, I haven't felt so alone because of the two of you. 
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"Hogwarts will always be there to welcome you home."
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Post subject: Posted: December 21st, 2006, 2:47 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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OMG, same here! I havent felt near as alone! & i'm not just saying that b/c u did arwen....it's the truth......*hugs like crazy*  I luv u guys! 
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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: December 26th, 2006, 6:13 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Yeah. lol It seems like sucha long time ago...
And I can relate with that as well. That poem was drawn from my emotions at the time and those emotions have not been so domanent since then.  You guys have helped with that a lot! 
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Post subject: Posted: December 27th, 2006, 3:52 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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*hugs* I'm glad, Jax!
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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: December 28th, 2006, 2:33 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
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*hugs back* *hug* 
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