Rules      FAQ       Register        Login
It is currently May 4th, 2025, 2:05 pm

All times are UTC - 5 hours [ DST ]




Post new topic Reply to topic  [ 13 posts ] 
Author Message
 Post subject: "Thinking of You" (PG)
PostPosted: December 15th, 2006, 5:09 pm 
Warden of the Knight
Warden of the Knight
User avatar

Joined: 04 November 2005
Posts: 19521
Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male

Offline
I know it's hard when the times seem dark,
I know it hurts when the heart feels broke.
I know it's confusing when you touch that spark,
I know it sends chills when you feel that stroke.

But I don't know what to tell you but hold to God.
I'm sorry. I don't know what to say.
All I can tell you is don't let go!
I wish there was more I could say.

I can imagine it hurts when you think about it,
I can imagine it would bring so much pain.
I can imagine your mind is spinning around it,
I can imagine the chill that comes with this "rain"

But I don't know what to tell you but hold to God.
I'm sorry. I don't know what to say.
All I can tell you is don't let go!
I wish there was more I could say.

I am sure there is longing and doubts the same,
I am sure theres emotions running free.
I am sure there is thoughts you can't contain,
I am sure there are things you can not see.

But I don't know what to tell you but hold to God.
I'm sorry. I don't know what to say.
All I can tell you is don't let go!
I wish there was more I could say.

I wish there was more I could say.
I wish I could help you out.
I hope you soon see the day,
When you will figure this out.

Hold on, hold strong.
God will not forsake.
Take hold, Be bold,
God will not forsake.

_________________
Image

Image

Visit The Varsian Kingdom!


Top
 Profile       WWW     YIM        
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 15th, 2006, 5:24 pm 
Balrog
Balrog
User avatar

Joined: 08 January 2006
Posts: 3132
Location: The Shire
Gender: Female

Offline
I think that I'm going to cry.....this poem menas so much to me, Jax....thank you....that really just...wow....I really beleive that things will be OK now....I really really do....you don't know how much this means to me....Thank you, so so much....

_________________
Image

"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."


Top
 Profile                  
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 16th, 2006, 4:28 pm 
Warden of the Knight
Warden of the Knight
User avatar

Joined: 04 November 2005
Posts: 19521
Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male

Offline
Like I said I am kind of... unable I guess, some times to really say things. But if I write a poem it seems to come out right.

I want to help people, especialy my friends. But like I said I just really don't know what else to say but trust in God. Because He will Never leave you nor forsake you! :)

I've never been through what your going through... But I am always glad to help.

_________________
Image

Image

Visit The Varsian Kingdom!


Top
 Profile       WWW     YIM        
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 16th, 2006, 10:03 pm 
Balrog
Balrog
User avatar

Joined: 08 January 2006
Posts: 3132
Location: The Shire
Gender: Female

Offline
I tend to 4get about God….it’s a horrible thing, but I do….I always remmber him, until times get really really tough like this, & then I just…idk….but having u there, telling me, hey God’s here, He’s not gonna leave u. don’t’ 4get that….that means the world to me….so thank u so so much. :hug: for everything. God truly blessed me the day I read ur 1st poem :)

_________________
Image

"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."


Top
 Profile                  
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 18th, 2006, 3:04 pm 
Warden of the Knight
Warden of the Knight
User avatar

Joined: 04 November 2005
Posts: 19521
Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male

Offline
Yeah. I have that problem myself some times. But I know it can help sooo much just to know God will never leave you. :) And I am glad that He can use me to incourage you as well.

lol I'm glad you got that blessing. Because if you had not I would never have got the blessing of a good friend. :)

And I probably would have never met Arwen either. So I got just as much blessings from it I think.

_________________
Image

Image

Visit The Varsian Kingdom!


Top
 Profile       WWW     YIM        
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 18th, 2006, 5:04 pm 
Balrog
Balrog
User avatar

Joined: 08 January 2006
Posts: 3132
Location: The Shire
Gender: Female

Offline
*hugs* idk wut i'd do if u guys werent here....if God hadn't put u in my life...thank u so so so so much.

_________________
Image

"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."


Top
 Profile                  
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 19th, 2006, 7:39 pm 
Istari
Istari
User avatar

Joined: 30 December 2005
Posts: 2901
Gender: Female

Offline
I love it Jax!! I know exactly what you mean- sometimes I can't express what I'm thinking or feeling by just saying it- I have to write it. (Just not usually in poetry form, lol)

You're right... I think that the first poem that Pip and I commented on was "Alone", wasn't it?? I remember how much I loved it, so immediately went and read all of your other poems. :)

_________________
"Hogwarts will always be there to welcome you home."


Top
 Profile                  
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 20th, 2006, 6:38 pm 
Balrog
Balrog
User avatar

Joined: 08 January 2006
Posts: 3132
Location: The Shire
Gender: Female

Offline
yup. that was def. the 1st 1, b/c i remeber reading it & almost crying, b/c it fit me so much...i could really relate 2 it....& i had just gotten in2 poetry & stuff, & then i read urs & i was like OMG! lol :) *sigh* Good times...good memories...:-P

_________________
Image

"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."


Top
 Profile                  
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 20th, 2006, 11:10 pm 
Istari
Istari
User avatar

Joined: 30 December 2005
Posts: 2901
Gender: Female

Offline
Lol... agreed. And I could relate so much to the poem as well. The funny thing is, that since then, I haven't felt so alone because of the two of you. :)

_________________
"Hogwarts will always be there to welcome you home."


Top
 Profile                  
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 21st, 2006, 2:47 pm 
Balrog
Balrog
User avatar

Joined: 08 January 2006
Posts: 3132
Location: The Shire
Gender: Female

Offline
OMG, same here! I havent felt near as alone! & i'm not just saying that b/c u did arwen....it's the truth......*hugs like crazy* :hug: I luv u guys! :)

_________________
Image

"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."


Top
 Profile                  
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 26th, 2006, 6:13 pm 
Warden of the Knight
Warden of the Knight
User avatar

Joined: 04 November 2005
Posts: 19521
Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male

Offline
Yeah. lol It seems like sucha long time ago...

And I can relate with that as well. That poem was drawn from my emotions at the time and those emotions have not been so domanent since then. :) You guys have helped with that a lot! :)

_________________
Image

Image

Visit The Varsian Kingdom!


Top
 Profile       WWW     YIM        
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 27th, 2006, 3:52 pm 
Balrog
Balrog
User avatar

Joined: 08 January 2006
Posts: 3132
Location: The Shire
Gender: Female

Offline
*hugs* I'm glad, Jax!

_________________
Image

"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."


Top
 Profile                  
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 28th, 2006, 2:33 pm 
Warden of the Knight
Warden of the Knight
User avatar

Joined: 04 November 2005
Posts: 19521
Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male

Offline
*hugs back* *hug* :)

_________________
Image

Image

Visit The Varsian Kingdom!


Top
 Profile       WWW     YIM        
 
Display posts from previous:  Sort by  
Post new topic Reply to topic  [ 13 posts ] 

All times are UTC - 5 hours [ DST ]




Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 13 guests


You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot post attachments in this forum

Jump to:  




Powered by phpBB © 2000, 2002, 2005, 2007 phpBB Group
Boyz theme by Zarron Media 2003