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 Post subject: Life in a Taxi (Finaly! A poem written by ME!)
PostPosted: March 4th, 2008, 9:52 pm 
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Life in a Taxi

Driving up the street,
driving down again
that's what life is
without your best friend.

Living in the dark
driving in the day
here the dogs bark
and what people say.

Feelings are numded
and hearts become heavy
when the one you love dies,
because it is too much to carry.

It seems that everyone can live on without it,
driving down this lonely road,
and it feels Im the only one
who can't live with this oversized load.

So now I will drive myself
to the land that I call home
and if anyone has a problem with me
I will just keep on driving alone.

Taxi, taxi!
let me in through your doors!
Taxi, taxi!
'Cause I won't let this heart brake anymore!




Yeah, that's it. It was inspired by my... Grandma. :'(

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PostPosted: March 7th, 2008, 7:17 pm 
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aww. its really really good. I loved the last line and the stanza before it
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and if anyone has a problem with me
I will just keep on driving alone.

and
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driving down this lonely road,
and it feels Im the only one
who can't live with this oversized load.


i love how it rhymes. Im sure your Grandma will think its lovely and sweet.
I am very sorry for your loss.


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PostPosted: March 8th, 2008, 2:56 pm 
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Thank you, Aryawen.

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PostPosted: March 18th, 2008, 7:30 pm 
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Mmm, I really like it.
It would sound really gorgeous with a little acoustic guitar...
but its also lovely just as a poem


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wow, that was a simply beautiful poem, taxi! :yes: wonderful and touching to read... good job, dear! :hug:

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Thanks everyone...

Dark -- It's hard to play a guitar for people on the internet :P But I know what you mean.

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Ditto, :) very cool poem. I like the entire feel. it's just very well done.

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Thanks Jax ;)

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Thanks :)

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